Writing Stories in Douluo, Goddesses Come Knocking
Chapter 3

Story Reviews Earn Rewards, Haters Banned for a Day!

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[Tang Sect had an outer disciple named Tang Toutou. He stole the sect's secret arts, and after the matter was exposed, he jumped off a cliff, believing he could prove his resolve through death...] [Later, he arrived in the world of Douluo Continent with the memories of his past life, under the name Tang Xiaochui.] [He had a father named Tang Hao, who had once been a renowned Titled Douluo...] [When he was six, he awakened his Martial Soul. Because of his parents' bloodlines, he possessed Twin Martial Souls: Blue Silver Grass and a hammer, with Innate Soul Power at level ten.] [After joining the Junior Soul Master Academy, his Soul Power had reached level twenty-nine over the course of six years.] [At the academy, he met the Idiot Beast King. The Beast King trusted him greatly and treated him as an older brother.] [But the Beast King did not know that Tang Xiaochui's father was a Titled Douluo!] [Now that they were about to graduate from the academy, Tang Xiaochui and the Beast King's fates were about to reach a crucial turning point.] [To find out what happened next, tune in next time!]

He had written over ten thousand words, laying out the early story of the two of them.

The content was very detailed, though he had changed the characters' names and some locations. Naturally, he had also added some of his own views.

When writing a story, the most important thing was enjoying what he wrote.

After checking it over, he was very satisfied!

As the story was written, the Wordless Heavenly Book flashed with golden light.

Upon closer inspection, the golden threads within its pages seemed to have brightened slightly.

This was a sign that his Martial Soul was gradually evolving.

But when the evolution would be complete was still unknown.

He turned to look out the window. It was already deep into the night.

The aftereffects of exhausting all his Soul Power hit him. His eyelids kept drooping, and his entire body felt weak.

Before he could put away the Wordless Heavenly Book, he yawned, closed his eyes, and fell asleep over the desk.

After he fell asleep, the Wordless Heavenly Book closed, then gave off countless faint white specks of light.

The specks drifted out the window, scattered once outside, and flew in every direction.

Inside Spirit Hall, Pope Bibi Dong sat upright upon her throne.

Her sharp, cold gaze rested outside, her papal majesty fully on display.

Suddenly, white light flickered before her.

Her eyes narrowed as she stared directly at the suddenly appearing light, showing no panic whatsoever.

A moment later, the white light turned into an ancient scroll and unfurled before her.

"A book?"

Bibi Dong frowned slightly. Had someone used some special Soul Skill on her?

No, there were no Soul Power fluctuations.

Nor had she sensed anyone approaching.

She was the only person in the enormous hall!

Then where had this book come from?

As she pondered, she noticed the words inside.

"The story of the Double-Standard Hammer King and the Idiot Beast King?"

She involuntarily read the title aloud, then continued down the story.

Though there were many words, she still finished it quickly and roughly remembered much of its content.

"Transmigration? Rebirth?"

"Tang Xiaochui, a Titled Douluo, and a Beast King?"

The content made her frown deeply. It felt like a story written by an elementary school student.

The ideas were certainly wild, but why had this Storybook appeared before her?

And in such a strange manner!

She felt nothing about the content and was about to destroy the Storybook when she noticed the word "Review" at the very end.

Driven by curiosity, she tapped it with her finger.

A box popped up from the Storybook, seemingly allowing her to write something inside.

Bibi Dong thought for a moment, then immediately began writing.

Spider Emperor Douluo: 'Boring content!'

After writing it, she tapped the word "Submit."

But after she tapped Submit, a red box popped up.

[Please follow the civilized rules of the Book Review Section and leave a sincere review!]

Bibi Dong's brow twitched.

What did that mean?

Spider Emperor Douluo: 'Stupid content fit for three-year-olds!'

[Please follow the civilized rules of the Book Review Section and leave a sincere review! Speak rudely again, and you will be banned for three days!]

This time, the warning contained even more text. Bibi Dong was so angry that her face nearly turned green.

Was this thing messing with her?

Spider Emperor Douluo: 'What does this Pope have to fear?!'

[Please follow the civilized rules of the Book Review Section. Threats are forbidden! Final warning!]

Spider Emperor Douluo: 'The content is quite good. Very interesting.'

Bibi Dong's mouth twitched. Her mentality was about to collapse, so she casually wrote something and submitted it.

This time, another box appeared, but it was no longer the previous red warning. It was golden.

[Thank you for your review. Reward: Your first Martial Soul's first Spirit Ring age has been increased by one thousand years!]

Seeing that message, Bibi Dong froze. Once she recovered, there was a hint of mockery in her eyes.

Increase a Spirit Ring's age?

Aside from a God Trial, that was simply impossible!

But just as she thought that, a golden beam shot out from the box and entered her chest in an instant.

Bibi Dong's expression changed slightly. Had someone plotted against her?

At that thought, her face was truly about to turn green.

But at that moment, her first Martial Soul's first Spirit Ring suddenly floated out and instantly changed from yellow to purple!

She abruptly stood up and stared fixedly at the Spirit Ring, unable to conceal the shock in her eyes.

"It really increased?"

Bibi Dong was greatly astonished. The age of her first Spirit Ring had truly increased by a thousand years.

The increase in the Spirit Ring's age also caused her Soul Power to rise slightly.

"Could it be that reviews grant rewards?"

Bibi Dong's heart sank. She immediately opened the Book Review Section, preparing to leave another review.

But then a prompt popped up, saying she could only review once per day!

In other words, she had to wait until tomorrow to review again!

That left her somewhat regretful.

Meanwhile, inside Nuoding Academy.

The sleeping Xiao Wu suddenly sat bolt upright like a corpse rising from the dead, dazedly staring at the contents of the scroll before her.

After an unknown amount of time, she suddenly turned to look at Tang San beside her.

"Why is this content so similar to what happened between Little San and me?"

Xiao Wu scratched her face. A Storybook had suddenly appeared, and it was even about her and Tang San?

It looked so strange!

Some of the content within it was even more shocking to her.

For example, it described her life in the Star Dou Great Forest and even mentioned Daming and Erming!

Though the names were different, it was definitely about Daming and Erming.

If this was truly her and Tang San's story, then that meant Tang San's father was a Titled Douluo?

No, no, no. That was impossible!

The Storybook's origins were unknown, and its content was clearly slanderous.

She had no idea which rotten bastard had made up such nonsense!

Seeing the word "Review," she wrote down her thoughts, filled with resentment.

Pink Rabbit: 'Impossible! Little San is absolutely not that kind of person!'

[Please follow the civilized rules of the Book Review Section. Do not deceive yourself; leave a sincere review!]

Deceiving herself?

Xiao Wu's eyes widened. Was it mocking her?

Pink Rabbit: 'Why are you slandering Little San? The author has no conscience!'

[Insulting the author. Hater! Banned for one day!]

Xiao Wu: ???

She had been banned just like that?

Seeing that warning, she felt utterly awful.

She was actually being bullied by a Storybook?

In an instant, she felt that her life as a rabbit had suffered the greatest humiliation. She glared angrily at the book, unable to fall asleep no matter what.

So she began reading the content again from the beginning, trying to find flaws in it to refute.

And in the depths of the night, the Storybook appeared before one person after another.

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