Writing Stories in Douluo, Goddesses Come Knocking
Chapter 33

The Story: Qian Renxue Was Stunned

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After sorting through his thoughts, Ye Mu carefully recalled Qian Renxue's childhood and the events related to her.

Once he had considered everything clearly, he opened the Wordless Heavenly Book. As Soul Power flowed into it, its contents swiftly emerged.

[The favored daughter of Spirit Hall, the biological granddaughter of Grand Pontiff Qian Daoliu, and the biological daughter of the current Pope of Spirit HallQian Renxue!] [Qian Renxue's childhood was somewhat tragic. Because of the grudges between her parents' generation, even her own mother believed she was a child who should never have been born.] [Some terribly tragic things had happened to Bibi Dong, so she held no affection for her own daughter.] [But the young Qian Renxue did not know any of this. Like any ordinary child, she longed for maternal love and wanted to grow close to her mother.] [Yet Bibi Dong was unwilling. Being with her daughter even made her recall the past that had nearly driven her mad and filled her with despair.] [Thus, night after night, meeting after meeting, Bibi Dong ignored her.] [Qian Renxue was deeply confused. Why was her mother always so cold and distant toward her, yet so close to disciples like Hu Liena?]

How many times had she silently watched from behind, yearning for her mother to turn around and look at her just once?

But her hopes always shattered like bubbles. She would never receive her mother's concern, never receive even a trace of maternal love.

How many times had she silently waited outside the Pope Palace, outside Bibi Dong's chambers?

From night until dawn, the figure she longed for never appeared.

Qian Renxue did not lose heart. She believed she was not outstanding enough, not hardworking enough, which was why her mother never noticed her.

She persisted in waiting outside the chambers. During the freezing winter nights, she even fell ill several times while still so young.

After her repeated waits received no response, Qian Daoliu finally could not bear to watch any longer and took her to his side to raise her.

At Qian Daoliu's side, she finally felt the care of an elder. Though Qian Daoliu was stern, he gave her affection.

Qian Daoliu trained her until she reached adulthood.

Though she had received care at Qian Daoliu's side, a child's longing for a mother's love would never disappear.

Deep in her heart, that yearning for maternal love had only grown stronger, even though she usually pretended not to care.

In the end, to prove how outstanding she was, to escape that heartless mother, and to draw her mother's attention, Qian Renxue left Spirit Hall to accomplish something great.

Ye Mu's thoughts raced as he wrote down a vast amount of content.

It was another sprawling tale of tens of thousands of words.

From Qian Renxue's childhood to the time she left Spirit Hall, every detail was written out thoroughly.

He only stopped when his Soul Power was nearly exhausted.

After carefully checking it and confirming there were no mistakes, he put away the Wordless Heavenly Book.

While he slept soundly, those who possessed Storybooks had already begun staying up late to catch up on the latest update.

[Pink Rabbit: 'Another update? Why is it a new story?'] [Glazed Baby: 'Damn it! The previous story isn't even finished yet. Update faster, update faster!'] [Green Wild Goose: 'Why aren't you urging an update? Are you trying to get something for nothing?'] [Little Snake Playing with a Stick: 'This title is kind of interesting. Unrequited Love of the Broken-Winged Angel—an obsessive girl?'] [Angel Without Parents: 'Huh? An obsessive girl? Let me see what's going on!']

Within the Heaven Dou Empire, Qian Renxue opened her Storybook.

Before even reading the new story, she began looking through the Book Review Section.

The Book Friends in the Book Review Section were quite interesting.

After taking another glance, she noticed that her mother seemed not to have left any comments. For some reason, that made her feel irritated.

Then, upon seeing the new story's title, she felt an odd sensation.

Could this be related to me?

Qian Renxue muttered inwardly. If it was a story about her, would she be able to learn about her own future?

When she had previously seen Bibi Dong's future, her heart had truly ached.

In the end, Bibi Dong would die in war.

Fortunately, now that they knew the future, there was still a chance to change it.

Now that it concerned her own future, she wanted to take a look as well.

But the moment she opened the story, the beginning made her mentality explode.

It had actually revealed her identity right away!

And it said her childhood had been tragic?

It's over. People might find out about those things.

Qian Renxue's face turned deathly pale, but soon her pretty face flushed red.

Because the story really did reveal those things.

It was over!

This time, many Book Friends would see the content.

She truly could not understand why even such secret matters had been discovered.

She had secretly waited outside Bibi Dong's chambers all night. Even Bibi Dong herself did not know about it, yet outsiders knew?

And the reason she had left Spirit Hall—the Storybook had analyzed it so clearly?

Although it did not directly state what she had gone to do after leaving Spirit Hall, she was still worried.

As the story continued to be written, would everything be completely exposed?

And why did her existence make Bibi Dong recall a past filled with madness and even despair?

What exactly was the reason her mother hated her so much?

From childhood until now, she truly had never understood this.

Her grandfather had never told her about those matters.

But now, perhaps she could understand through the Storybook.

If she could find the reason her mother hated her, would there be a chance to mend the relationship between mother and daughter?

Just as the Storybook said, her longing for maternal love had become even stronger by now, even stronger than when she was young.

Especially whenever she saw Bibi Dong with Hu Liena, she even felt intense jealousy.

She was jealous of Hu Liena!

She even hated Hu Liena for taking her mother away.

"Why exactly?"

Qian Renxue murmured as she looked at the contents of the Storybook, her mood growing lower and lower.

The Book Review Section soon became lively again.

[Glazed Baby: '@Angel Without Parents, it's you, definitely you! What a pitiful child~'] [Little Snake Playing with a Stick: 'She really is pitiful. Even with a mother, it's worse than having no mother at all.'] [Violent Fire Dragon: '@Spider Emperor Douluo, hey, hey, hey, you already have a daughter, so why are you still thinking about Xiao Gang? Have you no shame?'] [Green Wild Goose: 'It really is tragic. Will there be a good ending later? And she's actually the Pope's daughter!']

Within Spirit Hall, Bibi Dong read the Storybook's contents and noticed the Book Review Section as well, but she did not respond.

She frowned.

The young Qian Renxue had waited outside her chambers all night?

She had even fallen ill several times!

Why did she not know about these things?

In Qian Renxue's heart, did she still long for maternal love?

Impossible!

At that moment, Bibi Dong inexplicably felt somewhat emotional.

As the influence of Asura God's evil thoughts weakened, her heart seemed to be gradually returning to that of a normal person.

For some reason, seeing Qian Renxue's childhood experiences written out now made her feel inexplicably distressed.

Perhaps it was because Yu Xiaogang's exploitation of her had already been exposed.

That heartless scumbag had never been worthy of her love.

And Qian Renxue, though Qian Xunji had forced her to give birth to her, was ultimately an innocent child.

Had she truly been wrong to treat her that way before?

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