Ch. 181Troublemakers, Part 2

“Troublemakers, Part 2” — Chapter Summary

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Su Yu takes Hermione and Ginny fishing at the Black Lake. When no fish bite, he uses Lightning Cutter directly in the water, boiling the lake and electrocuting a huge number of creatures.
  • The blast affects not only ordinary fish but also Plimpys, Grindylows, and several merpeople. The three quickly gather the floating fish and flee before the merpeople can confront them.
  • The merpeople’s chieftain angrily orders his clan to avoid Su Yu and his companions, even instructing them to place fish on their hooks rather than risk another encounter.
  • Back at Hogwarts, Su Yu proudly dumps the dead fish onto the Great Hall floor. McGonagall deducts Slytherin points and orders him to clean up.
  • The group realizes that Su Yu did not merely stun the fish—he likely killed them and injured the merpeople as well. Snape then announces an additional point deduction after receiving a formal protest from the merpeople.
  • The students discuss an unrelated disaster in Hogsmeade: the village has been overwhelmed by popcorn, which has apparently rained from the sky and covered the streets.
  • Kurama returns covered in popcorn, followed by Malfoy, Pansy, Goyle, and Crabbe, who are dragging an enormous sack of popcorn into the Great Hall.
  • Kurama explains that the popcorn disaster occurred because Malfoy and the others overloaded a popcorn machine with grain and seasoning. They used Ancient Magic to keep it operating despite its limited capacity, causing it to explode and flood Hogsmeade with popcorn.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu remains reckless, powerful, and unconcerned with the consequences of his actions. He treats the electrocution of the lake’s creatures as a successful fishing method and proudly calls himself the “Fishing Emperor.”
  • Hermione and Ginny participate in Su Yu’s scheme, helping collect the fish, though Ginny accidentally reveals the truth about their deaths.
  • Daphne and the other girls demonstrate increasing familiarity with Su Yu’s behavior, immediately suspecting that his “fishing” caused serious damage.
  • Kurama continues to be a mischievous troublemaker but tries to escape blame by acting innocent and claiming she was only watching. Her account reveals that she was swept away by the popcorn explosion and now dislikes popcorn.
  • Malfoy, Pansy, Goyle, and Crabbe are shown to be incompetent with magical technology. Their attempt to operate the popcorn machine creates a large-scale public disaster and leaves them exhausted.
  • McGonagall and Snape act as exasperated authorities, responding to Su Yu’s repeated chaos with point deductions rather than surprise.

Significant Themes

  • Consequences of reckless power: Su Yu’s casual use of advanced magic creates serious harm to the lake’s ecosystem and the merpeople, even though he views the event as harmless fun.
  • Recurring mischief and escalation: Both the fishing incident and the popcorn explosion show how small acts of curiosity or incompetence quickly become major disasters.
  • Found-family camaraderie: The characters frequently tease, assist, and cover for one another, even while criticizing each other’s behavior.
  • Authority versus chaos: Hogwarts staff and the merpeople try to impose order, but Su Yu and the other troublemakers repeatedly overwhelm their efforts.
  • Comedy through understatement: Dangerous events—electrocuted merpeople, mass flooding by popcorn, and magical explosions—are treated humorously by the characters, emphasizing the chapter’s chaotic tone.

Character Interactions

  • Su Yu jokingly defends himself to Daphne and the others, while Ginny unintentionally exposes the truth.
  • Hermione and Ginny serve as witnesses to Su Yu’s fishing stunt, while Daphne criticizes him and worries about the merpeople.
  • McGonagall penalizes Su Yu’s house but reacts with weary indifference, showing that his behavior has become routine.
  • Snape reinforces the punishment by announcing the merpeople’s complaint.
  • Daphne questions Kurama about the popcorn disaster, and Kurama shifts responsibility onto Malfoy and the others.
  • The chapter ends with the group confronting the full absurdity of the popcorn incident: Malfoy’s party caused it through magical misuse, while Kurama was caught in the resulting avalanche.

Ch. 182The Second Task Begins Soon

Chapter Summary: “The Second Task Begins Soon”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Hogwarts introduces two new rules after Su Yu and Kurama’s recent mischief: electrical fishing in the Black Lake and unauthorized popcorn-making in Hogsmeade are banned. Their actions cost Slytherin fifty points, though the house is unconcerned because it has effectively remained at zero.
  • As winter gives way to early spring, the grounds begin to thaw. Snowdrops and hazel catkins appear, the Black Lake partially melts, and the days become longer and less bitterly cold.
  • Dumbledore announces that the second task of the Eight-Way Championship will take place on February 24 in the Great Hall. The Champions will receive their instructions at the start of the two-hour event. He assures everyone that it will not be excessively dangerous and invites students, staff, guests, and judges to watch. He also hints that the judges have prepared a surprise.
  • The students speculate about the nature of the task. Theodore suggests it may be designed to restrict Kurama’s abilities in the Great Hall, while others wonder whether it could involve physical activity, exams, or even an eating contest.
  • Su Yu remains unconcerned, trusting Dumbledore’s promise that the event will not be dangerous and mainly hoping it will not involve an examination.
  • A week before the task, ordinary school life continues. Su Yu jokes with his companions about missing clothes and expensive stockings, while the students attend Care of Magical Creatures.
  • Hagrid has returned to teaching after Harry and Dumbledore persuaded him to do so, although many students still prefer Professor Grubbly-Plank’s lessons.
  • During class, Pansy eagerly shows Draco two newborn unicorn foals, but Draco misunderstands her and assumes she wants to buy something. Later, Blaise mocks Draco for having two large bumps on his head, apparently continuing the chapter’s pattern of playful teasing and schoolyard rivalry.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu remains carefree, irreverent, and uninterested in overthinking the competition. His humor and casual attitude contrast with the anxiety surrounding the upcoming task.
  • Kurama continues to be mischievous and easily offended, particularly when Su Yu gives her only sandwich crusts. She is also defensive about the possibility that the second task might limit her abilities.
  • Dumbledore maintains an enigmatic but reassuring role. He provides limited information, encourages preparation, and deliberately builds suspense with his mention of a surprise.
  • Hermione acts as a practical, responsible presence, keeping Ginny and Kurama on schedule and correcting Su Yu’s crude jokes.
  • Malfoy continues provoking foreign students and behaving arrogantly, though his interactions with Pansy reveal his obliviousness and comedic lack of sensitivity.
  • Harry and Ron are visibly nervous as the competition approaches, with Harry’s anxiety affecting Ron as well.
  • Pansy shows a softer, more affectionate side through her excitement over the unicorn foals.
  • Hagrid has regained enough confidence to return to teaching, though his popularity remains lower than Grubbly-Plank’s.

Significant Themes

  • Anticipation and uncertainty: Dumbledore’s vague announcement and promise of a surprise create suspense about the second task.
  • Competition versus casual school life: While the Champions and some students are nervous, Su Yu and the Slytherins treat the event with humor and irreverence.
  • Friendship and group dynamics: The students’ teasing, shared meals, and casual conversations show the close-knit, chaotic relationships within the Slytherin group.
  • The transition from winter to spring: The changing weather mirrors the chapter’s movement toward a new stage of the championship and a period of heightened activity.
  • Humor and parody: School rules, the Slytherins’ indifference to losing points, Su Yu’s sandwich habits, and Malfoy’s misunderstandings undercut the seriousness of the upcoming event.

Character Interactions

  • Su Yu feeds Kurama sandwich crusts, provoking her silent indignation.
  • Hermione, Ginny, and Kurama spend time together in the Slytherin common room, with Hermione later taking responsibility for getting them back to bed.
  • Theodore speculates with Su Yu and the others about whether the task is meant to neutralize Kurama’s powers.
  • Goyle and Crabbe attempt to sneak toward Su Yu’s pork jerky.
  • Su Yu jokes with Hermione about Harry’s nervous behavior during Care of Magical Creatures.
  • Pansy excitedly shows Draco the unicorn foals, but Draco mistakes her enthusiasm for a request to purchase something.
  • Blaise mocks Draco’s strange appearance, continuing the playful antagonism among the Slytherin students.

Ch. 183Sirius

Chapter Summary: “Sirius”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • The chapter opens with a humorous author’s note about an accident while delivering food, establishing a lighthearted tone.
  • On February 24, Hermione dresses carefully in a pink, lace-trimmed outfit and heads to breakfast with Ginny.
  • They encounter Harry, who has dark circles under his eyes after suffering nightmares about Malfoy attacking him with Dungbombs.
  • Ginny teases Harry, claiming that people often dream about those they secretly like. She also jokingly warns him about Su Yu, who already has two girlfriends.
  • Su Yu arrives at the Great Hall and finds students from all eight participating schools waiting. Kurama complains dramatically that everyone has apparently eaten and that there is no food left, prompting Dumbledore to intervene.
  • Dumbledore announces the second event of the Eight-Way Championship: Gourmet Kitchen, a cooking competition.
  • The 114 students must prepare breakfast and lunch for more than a thousand students, professors, and headmasters. The event consists of two one-hour rounds.
  • The contestants react with confusion and dismay. Many, including Callis, Pheobe, Krum, and the students from several foreign schools, have little or no cooking experience. Goyle and Crabbe are especially disappointed because they expected to eat rather than cook.
  • Dumbledore introduces the judges: Sirius Black and Professor Severus Snape.
  • Harry is thrilled to see Sirius, his godfather, serving as a judge.
  • Sirius appears in a stylish suit and immediately attracts attention from the girls. He then spends much of his introduction mocking Snape, especially Snape’s greasy hair.
  • The rules are explained: each school must appoint a non-cooking captain to coordinate the team, while the other members prepare dishes ordered from a provided menu. Scores will depend on speed, quantity, and customer satisfaction.
  • The chapter ends with Snape sarcastically challenging Sirius over his insults, while Sirius continues teasing him.

Character Developments

  • Harry appears exhausted and vulnerable after his nightmares, though Ginny’s teasing introduces a possible romantic interpretation of his dream.
  • Hermione is shown making a special effort with her appearance, suggesting that the day—or someone attending it—matters to her.
  • Ginny continues to act playful and perceptive, teasing Harry while also revealing her own apparent affection for Su Yu.
  • Su Yu remains sarcastic and unconcerned about the competition, though he is also irritated that the event is more complicated than expected.
  • Kurama is characterized as comically food-obsessed and theatrically dramatic.
  • Dumbledore acts as the composed organizer, maintaining order despite the contestants’ confusion and Kurama’s antics.
  • Sirius is introduced as flamboyant, charismatic, and mischievous. He enjoys performing for the crowd and provoking Snape.
  • Snape remains stern, prideful, and easily irritated by Sirius, providing a sharp contrast to Sirius’s playful personality.

Significant Themes

  • Comedy through contrast: The grand international championship is transformed into a chaotic cooking contest, creating humor through the contestants’ lack of preparation.
  • Competition and teamwork: Success depends not only on individual talent but also on organization, leadership, speed, and cooperation.
  • Food and culture: The contestants’ reactions reflect differing national cuisines and stereotypes, while also poking fun at cultural pride and culinary expectations.
  • Friendship and affection: Harry’s concern over his nightmares, Ginny’s teasing, and Harry’s excitement at seeing Sirius emphasize personal relationships within the larger competition.
  • Rivalry as entertainment: Sirius and Snape’s antagonistic banter turns their professional judging roles into a comedic performance.

Important Character Interactions

  • Harry, Hermione, and Ginny: Hermione and Ginny discover Harry exhausted from nightmares; Ginny teases him about secretly liking Malfoy.
  • Su Yu and Kurama: Su Yu tries to control Kurama’s exaggerated hunger complaints.
  • Kurama and Dumbledore: Dumbledore interrupts Kurama’s dramatic outburst and reminds her that no one has eaten yet.
  • Harry and Sirius: Harry reacts enthusiastically upon learning that Sirius is one of the judges, highlighting their close bond.
  • Sirius and Snape: Their hostile but humorous exchange dominates the chapter’s final scene, with Sirius mocking Snape’s appearance and Snape objecting to the insults.

Ch. 184The Second Round Begins!

Chapter Summary: “The Second Round Begins!”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • The judges, Professors Snape and Sirius Black, argue during the competition briefing. Snape deducts points from Hermione for speaking out of turn, while Black defends her and awards Gryffindor additional points. Dumbledore and McGonagall eventually restore order.
  • The Champions are taken to the Hogwarts kitchens for the second round of the Eight-Way Championship: preparing at least 150 simple breakfasts for the students.
  • The house-elves are mysteriously absent, leaving the competitors to cook for themselves. Su Yu, leading Hogwarts’s team, realizes that only Daphne has reliable cooking skills and becomes worried about their chances.
  • The required meals are simple breakfast sets, preceded by a fruit salad. The competition begins with the teams preparing pineapple, strawberries, and Hami melon.
  • Several schools work efficiently. Mahoutokoro and Beauxbatons wash and prepare the fruit carefully, while Uagadou is the first to finish its appetizer salads. Koldovstoretz and Durmstrang show poor hygiene and preparation methods.
  • Hogwarts immediately falls into chaos. Fred and George forget the pineapple, Malfoy burns his egg whites and tries to hide the damage, and Harry, Cedric, Cho, and Olivia burn the bacon. Other students struggle with seasoning, timing, and kitchen safety.
  • Blaise nearly sets the stove on fire when a towel catches flame while he is frying toast. Hogwarts’s students waiting in the Great Hall grow increasingly hungry and frustrated as their team falls far behind the others.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu takes his role as captain seriously, attempting to coordinate the team, but his lack of cooking ability leaves him dependent on the others. His mounting frustration shows how difficult it is for him to manage the disorganized Hogwarts group.
  • Daphne emerges as the most competent cook on the Hogwarts team, though even she and her group are slower than the other competitors.
  • Fred and George display their usual carelessness by forgetting one of the only three required fruits, worsening Su Yu’s stress.
  • Malfoy tries to conceal his burnt food rather than admit failure, revealing his pride and tendency toward deception. Snape publicly humiliates him for it.
  • Harry, Cedric, Cho, and Olivia become distracted by the chaos around them and fail to monitor the bacon, resulting in it being burned beyond recognition.
  • Blaise proves reckless and inattentive, nearly causing a fire while preparing toast.
  • Snape remains strict and critical, both as a judge and as a professor, while Black acts as his outspoken opponent and defends the students.

Significant Themes

  • Leadership versus competence: Su Yu can delegate and supervise but cannot personally solve the cooking problems, exposing the limits of leadership without practical skill.
  • Teamwork and coordination: The round emphasizes how poor communication, distraction, and carelessness can ruin even simple tasks.
  • Competition and pressure: The time limit and public audience cause the Hogwarts students to panic, turning an easy assignment into chaos.
  • Appearances versus honesty: Malfoy’s attempt to hide the burnt egg whites illustrates the temptation to conceal mistakes rather than correct them.
  • Humor through incompetence: The exaggerated kitchen disasters—forgotten fruit, burnt bacon, unseasoned eggs, and a near-fire—create a comic contrast with the simplicity of the menu.

Character Interactions

  • Snape and Black clash over authority, discipline, and Hermione’s interruption.
  • Snape criticizes Malfoy for attempting to serve burnt food.
  • Su Yu repeatedly reprimands his teammates, especially the Weasley twins, Harry, Cedric, and the students mishandling the cooking.
  • The Hogwarts students waiting in the Great Hall express their frustration by banging their forks as other schools finish their meals.
  • The different schools’ contrasting approaches to preparation highlight Hogwarts’s disorganization and intensify the competitive pressure.

Ch. 185The Second Match

Chapter Summary: “The Second Match”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • After Hogwarts Academy’s chaotic first cooking match, the team collapses from exhaustion. Although Daphne helped keep the group organized, they finished last and produced mediocre food.
  • In the Slytherin common room, Ka-jie suggests changing their strategy, but Malfoy admits that cooking is simply not their strength. Hermione, Ginny, and Daphne encourage everyone not to give up, reminding them that they have another chance at lunchtime.
  • The second mini-match introduces a more difficult challenge: students select dishes from a large international menu, and their orders are randomly assigned to the competing Champions.
  • Malfoy tries to demonstrate his improvement by frying scallops before anyone orders them. Snape praises the result but criticizes Malfoy for preparing a dish unnecessarily and for misunderstanding how it should be served.
  • Olivia and Callis prepare pasta, but Callis repeatedly judges it too bland, causing them to add an absurd amount of salt. The result is nearly inedible, yet Blaise blames the student for giving them a poor review.
  • Malfoy ignores a student’s request for pan-fried salmon and transforms it into a heavily seasoned stew. Despite his confidence, the dish is unrecognizable and must be redone.
  • Harry and Fred and George attempt beef Wellington. They fail to sear the meat properly, leaving it nearly raw. The twins blame each other and begin fighting while Harry protests.
  • Snape, having lost faith in the students’ cooking abilities, leaves Su Yu to perform quality control. He notices that, despite the team producing large quantities of failed food, their waste bin remains perfectly clean and empty—a mystery that even Su Yu cannot explain.

Character Developments

  • Malfoy becomes more confident after the first match, but his confidence remains disconnected from actual skill. He improvises recklessly and insists on altering recipes according to his own ideas.
  • Daphne continues to act as the team’s emotional support, encouraging the others rather than criticizing their failures.
  • Su Yu is increasingly forced into the role of supervisor and quality inspector. His frustration grows as he deals with the team’s repeated mistakes.
  • Snape shifts from judge and mentor to an exasperated caretaker, repeatedly trying to correct the students while clearly losing patience.
  • Olivia and Callis demonstrate poor judgment but remain sincere: Olivia follows Callis’s advice, while Callis is genuinely confused when the overly salty pasta is rejected.
  • Fred and George retain their usual competitive, argumentative dynamic, immediately blaming one another when their dish fails.
  • Hermione and Ginny remain enthusiastic supporters, although they lack the cooking ability to help directly.

Significant Themes

  • Incompetence despite confidence: Many characters approach cooking with certainty, only to produce disastrous results.
  • Teamwork and encouragement: Even though the team repeatedly fails, its members continue encouraging one another and trying again.
  • The gap between intention and execution: The Champions want to succeed, but poor judgment, misunderstanding, and overconfidence repeatedly undermine them.
  • Comedy through chaos: The cooking competition turns ordinary mistakes into exaggerated disasters, emphasizing the absurdity of the group’s behavior.
  • Persistence and adaptation: The team recognizes the need to improve after the first match and attempts new strategies, even if those efforts create further problems.

Character Interactions

  • Ka-jie and Malfoy discuss the team’s poor performance, with Malfoy defending the group’s effort.
  • Hermione, Ginny, and Daphne encourage the exhausted Champions and keep morale from collapsing.
  • Snape alternates between praising and correcting Malfoy, while Su Yu reacts with increasing disbelief to Malfoy’s decisions.
  • Olivia relies on Callis’s taste judgment, but their collaboration produces disastrously salty pasta.
  • Blaise joins in defending the failed dish and jokingly threatens the dissatisfied student.
  • Su Yu confronts Malfoy over changing the salmon recipe and later inspects the Weasley twins’ failed beef Wellington.
  • Fred and George argue over who forgot to sear the steak, turning the cooking failure into another quarrel.
  • Snape’s discovery of the mysteriously empty trash bin introduces an unresolved mystery at the chapter’s close.

Ch. 186Final Rankings (Thanks to Wandu Tinglan for the reminder gift, thank you)

Chapter Summary

Key Plot Points and Events

  • After Hogwarts Academy’s match, Kurama hides backstage and arranges for Harry to leave discarded fish unattended. She then calls Goyle and Crabbe out of hiding, and the three secretly eat rejected ingredients after reheating them.
  • Su Yu catches them. He scolds Kurama for taking advantage of Goyle and Crabbe, while Goyle innocently offers him a charred fish tail.
  • Professor Snape arrives and sarcastically criticizes the cooks for eating while the students and guests are nearly starving. Cho Chang, however, encourages Kurama to be more discreet when stealing food.
  • During the cooking preparations, Malfoy successfully makes several pan-fried flounders using magic, but accidentally prepares three portions when only one was ordered. He explains that he was trying to prepare backups in case the first dish failed.
  • Callis attempts to contribute by making creamy okra soup, despite having no cooking ability. The result is an awful black, slimy dish that the judges compare to filth. The headmasters unanimously reject it.
  • After the matches, Hogwarts Academy’s Champions have consumed or taken nearly all the food, leaving the kitchen and even the cellar empty. The staff are horrified when they discover that nothing remains for later meals.
  • Hogwarts Academy receives the lowest possible score from every judge and headmaster: ten scores of 1. After ranking adjustments, the academy finishes last in the second round by a huge margin.

Character Developments

  • Kurama is revealed as mischievous, opportunistic, and shamelessly resourceful. She disguises her food theft as an act of charity and even influences Goyle and Crabbe to eat the less desirable leftovers.
  • Goyle and Crabbe remain simple-minded but obedient. They willingly eat burnt food and do not question Kurama’s scheme, demonstrating their loyalty and lack of judgment.
  • Su Yu acts as the practical supervisor of the kitchen. He tries to maintain order and food quality, reprimanding the Champions while still tolerating their absurd behavior.
  • Snape becomes increasingly exasperated with Hogwarts Academy’s disorder. His sarcasm highlights how far their conduct has fallen below acceptable standards.
  • Malfoy shows genuine improvement in cooking technique and begins thinking ahead, though his preparation of excess food still reflects poor judgment and a tendency toward overproduction.
  • Callis wants to be useful but lacks culinary skill and judgment. Her failed soup demonstrates that enthusiasm alone cannot replace competence.
  • Cho Chang displays a playful, conspiratorial side by approving of Kurama’s theft and advising her to hide it better.
  • Dumbledore and the other judges maintain their authority by giving the academy the minimum possible score, treating the disastrous performance as a complete failure.

Significant Themes

  • Comedy through incompetence and chaos: The chapter exaggerates culinary mistakes, food theft, and magical cooking failures for humor.
  • Waste versus consumption: Although the Champions justify eating discarded food to prevent waste, their behavior ultimately creates shortages and deprives others.
  • Appearance versus quality: Malfoy’s attractive flounders and Callis’s horrifying soup emphasize that presentation and good intentions cannot compensate for poor execution.
  • Teamwork and poor discipline: Hogwarts Academy’s participants work together, but their cooperation is undisciplined and self-serving, damaging the academy’s performance.
  • Authority versus unruliness: Su Yu and Snape attempt to supervise the kitchen, but the students repeatedly ignore rules, forcing the adults to manage the consequences.
  • Competition and humiliation: The final perfect score of 1 underscores the academy’s spectacular defeat and turns the cooking contest into a public embarrassment.

Important Character Interactions

  • Harry and Kurama: Harry trusts Kurama with the discarded fish, unknowingly enabling her food-stealing plan.
  • Kurama, Goyle, and Crabbe: Kurama leads the pair in secretly eating rejected ingredients, while they follow her instructions without question.
  • Su Yu and the trio: Su Yu catches them, scolds Kurama, and tries to impose responsibility on the chaotic group.
  • Snape and the cooks: Snape mocks their selfish eating habits and expresses his frustration at the academy’s disastrous kitchen management.
  • Cho and Kurama: Cho encourages Kurama’s mischief rather than correcting it, reinforcing the chapter’s comic atmosphere.
  • Su Yu and Malfoy: Su Yu praises Malfoy’s technical improvement but criticizes him for preparing too much food.
  • Callis and the judges: Callis’s attempt to impress the judges with okra soup instead results in universal disgust.
  • Dumbledore, Snape, and the Champions: The headmasters discover the emptied kitchen and later collectively punish Hogwarts Academy with the lowest possible score.

Ch. 187Eating and Taking (Thanks to Wandu Tinglan for the Three Love-Powered Gifts)

Chapter Summary: “Eating and Taking”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • After the disastrous cooking competition, the Slytherins celebrate in their common room by eating food prepared by house-elves. Su Yu’s group has effectively taken both Hogwarts’ food supplies and the house-elves responsible for cooking it.
  • The students jokingly boast that they will resist Dumbledore if necessary, but they eventually return the house-elves when Dumbledore firmly demands their release.
  • Goyle and Crabbe overeat and collapse into a carb-induced stupor. They are taken to the Hospital Wing, where everyone confirms they are merely ill from excessive eating rather than poisoned.
  • Harry, Fred, and George fall asleep from exhaustion after cooking for the school. Ron suffers severe digestive problems after forcing himself to eat and praise the champions’ terrible dishes—especially Callis’s okra soup—in an attempt to support his friends.
  • The second competition ends, and the students return to normal classes.
  • Snape accuses Harry of repeatedly stealing ingredients from his private office, including African snake tree bark and Bicorn horn. Harry denies the accusation, correctly pointing out that Hermione had stolen those ingredients years earlier. Snape threatens him and even displays Veritaserum, but lacks proof and must abandon the matter.
  • During a Hogsmeade visit, Kurama races ahead while eating a Fizzing Whizzbee she tricked from Goyle and Crabbe. Malfoy and the others struggle to calm Goyle, eventually using a flattened Chocolate Frog as consolation.
  • Su Yu and the girls relax at Madam Puddifoot’s Tea Shop. The owner criticizes Su Yu for bringing so many girls on dates, but he proudly interprets the insult as evidence of his popularity.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu remains shamelessly confident and opportunistic, treating chaos, theft, and his reputation as sources of amusement rather than problems.
  • The Slytherins display their usual bravado and group loyalty, defending their failed cooking efforts while also showing concern for Goyle after his collapse.
  • Harry is portrayed as exhausted but defiant. He refuses to be intimidated by Snape, especially because the accusations are misplaced.
  • Ron demonstrates extreme loyalty to his friends by eating revolting food and pretending to enjoy it, though his suffering afterward makes him regret that decision.
  • Kurama becomes increasingly mischievous and fearless, openly bullying Goyle and taking advantage of his trusting nature.
  • Malfoy acts as a reluctant caretaker, trying to manage Goyle’s emotions and resolving to stock up on sweets in the future.
  • Callis is touched by Ron’s praise and interprets his suffering as encouragement, while Ron desperately tries to prevent her from cooking for him again.
  • Madam Puddifoot views Su Yu’s group dates as shameless, contrasting with Su Yu’s complete lack of embarrassment.

Significant Themes

  • Comedic chaos and excess: The aftermath of the competition turns cooking, eating, and school discipline into exaggerated disasters.
  • Loyalty and friendship: Ron endures horrible food to support his friends, while the Slytherins care for Goyle despite teasing him.
  • Shamelessness and self-confidence: Su Yu and his companions respond to criticism with humor and defiance rather than embarrassment.
  • Misplaced blame and misunderstandings: Snape suspects Harry of stealing ingredients, though the actual thief was Hermione, highlighting the story’s recurring comic confusion.
  • Childlike mischief: Kurama’s pranks and the students’ obsession with sweets create a playful, often unruly atmosphere.

Character Interactions

  • The Slytherins tease one another while celebrating their cooking “victory,” with Pansy, Callis, and Blaise encouraging the group’s defiant attitude.
  • Ginny and Hermione are stunned by the extent of Su Yu’s theft, while the others casually justify taking the house-elves along with the food.
  • Ron’s support of Callis’s cooking deeply affects her, even though he later begs her not to “repay” his kindness.
  • Snape and Harry engage in a tense confrontation during Potions, but Harry refuses to yield to Snape’s intimidation.
  • Kurama torments Goyle by stealing his candy, while Malfoy and Crabbe work together to calm him.
  • Madam Puddifoot mocks Su Yu’s habit of dating in a large group, and Su Yu confidently treats her complaint as praise.

Ch. 188Old Barty

Chapter Summary: “Old Barty”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Harry notices Professor Snape and Headmaster Karkaroff behaving suspiciously, while Malfoy observes that the headmasters of Mahoutokoro and Uagadou—Mochizuki Seigen and Asante Boadu—are secretly meeting despite pretending to be strangers.
  • Malfoy overhears part of their conversation. They discuss someone who is losing control and possibly losing his mind, debating whether to increase a mysterious “dosage” despite the risk of irreversible damage. They also mention a man in black and the need to strengthen security. Su Yu suspects the situation is connected to Voldemort.
  • Acting on Su Yu’s orders, Malfoy and his Slytherin companions continue provoking the Mahoutokoro students. On Easter, Malfoy confronts them under the pretense of investigating possible Death Eaters and attacks them with Goyle and Crabbe.
  • The Mahoutokoro students refuse to fight back. Even after being insulted and attacked, they apologize when Headmaster Mochizuki arrives. Their extraordinary restraint makes Malfoy uneasy, as he begins to view them as more dangerous because they conceal their anger.
  • Su Yu concludes that direct confrontation is unlikely to work and begins preparing for the final tournament event, which he believes will provide an opportunity to eliminate the Mahoutokoro group.
  • Harry becomes increasingly overconfident because he has avoided attacks throughout the year. Despite Sirius Black’s warnings, he continues sneaking out and seeking adventure.
  • Harry encounters Old Barty near the Forbidden Forest. Barty is badly wounded, dressed in rags, and speaking incoherently to a tree. When he briefly regains awareness, he urges Harry to find Dumbledore and warns that the Dark Lord is steadily regaining strength.
  • By the time Harry returns with Dumbledore, Old Barty has disappeared. A search by Dumbledore, other headmasters, and Ministry officials fails to locate him.
  • During the search, Karkaroff angrily confronts Dumbledore and spits at him. Professor Graves—secretly Grindelwald—intimidates and nearly silences Karkaroff, leaving him too frightened to enter Hogwarts for a week.
  • Harry then begins dreaming of Voldemort torturing Wormtail with the Cruciatus Curse. The pain causes Harry’s scar to burn intensely, and he finally reports the dreams to Dumbledore.
  • The chapter closes by raising questions about Barty Crouch Jr.’s past and whether he truly participated in the torture of Neville’s parents, suggesting that the accepted version of events may be incomplete.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu becomes increasingly suspicious and strategic. Although he lacks complete knowledge of the original story, he correctly connects the headmasters’ secret activities to Voldemort and prepares for a violent confrontation during the final event.
  • Malfoy shifts from confident bully to someone genuinely unsettled by the Mahoutokoro students’ calm resistance. Their refusal to retaliate makes him suspect that they are more dangerous than they appear.
  • The Mahoutokoro students, especially Kikuchi Tadao, show remarkable self-control. Kikuchi is furious and humiliated, but the group obeys Mochizuki and avoids escalating the conflict.
  • Harry becomes reckless and self-assured after avoiding danger for much of the year. His encounter with Old Barty and the disturbing dreams force him to recognize that the threat surrounding him is returning.
  • Old Barty appears physically broken and mentally unstable, yet briefly demonstrates clarity and urgency when warning Harry about Voldemort.
  • Karkaroff is shown to be volatile and fearful. His aggression toward Dumbledore collapses when Graves threatens him.
  • Graves/Grindelwald displays his intimidating authority, using violence and fear to control Karkaroff.
  • Dumbledore remains an important figure of investigation and guidance, though the chapter emphasizes that he does not possess all the answers about Barty Crouch Jr.’s history.

Significant Themes

  • Hidden agendas and deception: Secret conversations, disguised identities, and false appearances dominate the chapter. The headmasters conceal their true relationships and plans, while Graves hides Grindelwald’s identity.
  • Restraint versus aggression: Malfoy and his allies rely on insults and violence, whereas the Mahoutokoro students endure provocation without retaliating. The contrast suggests that outward weakness may conceal greater strength.
  • The return of Voldemort: Old Barty’s warning and Harry’s dreams indicate that Voldemort is rebuilding his power and that the coming danger is becoming unavoidable.
  • Uncertainty and incomplete knowledge: Su Yu knows the broad outcome but not the details, while Harry and Dumbledore must interpret unreliable visions and fragmented warnings. The truth about Barty Crouch Jr. also remains unresolved.
  • Overconfidence and consequences: Harry’s belief that no one would dare attack him leads directly to his encounter with Old Barty and the disturbing consequences that follow.
  • Moral ambiguity: The chapter questions official accounts of guilt and punishment, particularly in the case of Barty Crouch Jr., suggesting that justice may have been applied without fully establishing the truth.

Important Character Interactions

  • Malfoy and Su Yu: Malfoy reports his discoveries to Su Yu, who directs him to continue harassing the Mahoutokoro students and prepare for a possible attack.
  • Mochizuki and Asante: Their secret meetings reveal cooperation concerning an unstable individual whose condition is deteriorating.
  • Malfoy and the Mahoutokoro group: Malfoy repeatedly insults and finally attacks them, but their refusal to fight back leaves him more frightened than victorious.
  • Mochizuki and Malfoy: Mochizuki arrives after the attack and makes his students apologize, demonstrating discipline and political restraint.
  • Harry and Sirius: Sirius reprimands Harry for his reckless behavior, but Harry dismisses the warning because he believes himself untouchable.
  • Harry and Old Barty: Old Barty briefly trusts Harry with an urgent warning about Voldemort before disappearing.
  • Karkaroff, Dumbledore, and Graves: Karkaroff’s angry confrontation with Dumbledore ends when Graves violently intimidates him.
  • Harry and Dumbledore: After experiencing painful dreams of Voldemort torturing Wormtail, Harry seeks Dumbledore’s help and reports what he has seen.

Ch. 189The Final Match Begins!

Chapter Summary: “The Final Match Begins!”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • As spring turns to June, Hogwarts approaches the end of the school year. Students prepare for final exams while excitement builds around the final match of the Eight-Way Championship.
  • Hermione helps Harry study advanced defensive and offensive spells, including Impedimenta, Reducto, and Protego.
  • Because the Champions are exempt from exams, Su Yu and Daphne’s group quietly sit in the examination hall while Su Yu reflects on the threats surrounding the tournament.
  • Su Yu suspects that the final match may involve Voldemort’s allies. He rules out Karkaroff and the other frightened headmasters, but remains suspicious of Mahoutokoro, Uagadou, and the mysterious black-clad figure connected to them. He also wonders whether Barty Crouch or another unknown servant of Voldemort is involved.
  • Su Yu is reassured that the final match will take place inside the Map of Mountains and Seas, where he believes the protections and artifacts given to him by his father will keep him safe, even against extremely powerful enemies.
  • After the exams conclude, Professor McGonagall reminds Su Yu to bring the Champions to the Quidditch pitch the next morning.
  • The stadium is filled with parents, Ministry officials, teachers, and students supporting the contestants. Lucius Malfoy attends despite the pain of his Dark Mark, determined to watch Draco compete.
  • Neville’s parents proudly display a banner for him. Neville, now dating Parvati, appears more confident and self-assured than before.
  • Su Yu warns his team to treat the Mahoutokoro and Uagadou students as especially dangerous and to remain wary of everyone, since the true enemy is still unknown.
  • Dumbledore officially explains the rules of the final match:
    • Champions will be teleported to different parts of the Map of Mountains and Seas.
    • They must hunt magical beasts and locate treasures.
    • Teams will receive an overall score based on their accomplishments.
    • The map is divided into eight regions, each initially containing twenty people.
    • The playable area will shrink by one ring every two days, forcing contestants together.
    • The match will last thirty days inside the map, equivalent to only three days outside because of the time difference.
    • Contestants can crush a bracelet to escape if their lives are in danger.
  • The chapter ends just before the Champions are sent into the map, establishing the dangerous competition and the threat of sabotage.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu becomes increasingly cautious and strategic. He analyzes possible enemies, prepares his group for betrayal, and relies on the Map of Mountains and Seas and his hidden safeguards.
  • Hermione demonstrates her intelligence and dedication by helping Harry learn spells beyond his current year level.
  • Harry continues improving his combat abilities in preparation for the final match.
  • Neville shows significant growth in confidence. His relationship with Parvati and the support of his parents help him appear more mature and capable.
  • Lucius Malfoy reveals a more protective, family-oriented side by attending the competition despite the danger and the lingering effects of the Dark Mark.
  • Dumbledore acts as the calm, authoritative organizer who explains the match and reassures the assembled crowd.

Significant Themes

  • Anticipation and danger: The celebratory atmosphere surrounding the championship contrasts with Su Yu’s belief that the match may conceal a deadly plot.
  • Preparation and vigilance: Training, strategic planning, and awareness of possible enemies are emphasized as essential for survival.
  • Family and support: Parents and friends gather to encourage the Champions, showing how personal relationships give them strength.
  • Growth and confidence: Neville’s transformation reflects the broader theme of young characters becoming more capable and independent.
  • Competition under pressure: The shrinking map ensures that the contestants will eventually be forced into conflict, combining sport, survival, and warfare.
  • Hidden enemies and uncertainty: The identity of the black-clad figure and the possible involvement of Voldemort’s followers remain unresolved, creating suspense before the match begins.

Character Interactions

  • Hermione studies and practices spells with Harry, acting as his mentor.
  • Su Yu leaves the examination hall with Hermione and Daphne, showing his closeness to both of them.
  • Callis jokes with Blaise about arriving too early for breakfast, while Blaise teases her for being late.
  • Neville acknowledges the support of his parents and Parvati, gaining confidence from their encouragement.
  • Sirius, Lupin, and the Weasleys gather to cheer Harry, creating a warm family-like atmosphere.
  • Su Yu gives his Champions a final tactical warning, emphasizing teamwork and caution.
  • Dumbledore addresses the entire crowd and lays out the rules, officially beginning the final stage of the tournament.

Ch. 190Pheobe Wears Down an Eagle

Chapter Summary: “Pheobe Wears Down an Eagle”

Plot Points and Events

  • On Dumbledore’s command, the remaining 154 Champions enter the Map of Mountains and Seas. Su Yu is randomly teleported into an unfamiliar mountain pocket dimension, separate from the actual Classic of Mountains and Seas.
  • Kurama emerges from Su Yu’s body and accompanies him. Using his Tenseigan, Su Yu confirms that the competitors have been scattered throughout the wilderness.
  • Su Yu and Kurama discover that the magical beasts appear artificially bred, possessing only primitive instincts. Su Yu decides they can kill them without moral concern.
  • Su Yu spends the afternoon hunting beasts with Kurama Mode and Tailed Beast Bombs, rapidly raising his score above 300 points. However, he realizes that defeating monsters is inefficient compared with obtaining the final treasure, which is worth 10,000 points.
  • Harry has an uneventful but uncomfortable day, earning no points and surviving only by avoiding danger. He misses Su Yu’s companionship and food, eventually sleeping under his Invisibility Cloak.
  • Malfoy has exceptionally good luck, quickly finding Blaise and enjoying roasted lamb and lemonade with him.
  • Pheobe encounters a powerful eagle that repeatedly attacks and toys with her. Her spells barely affect it, forcing her to use Apparition again and again to escape. Exhausted and nearly out of magic, she continues fighting rather than risk being eliminated on the first day.
  • Su Yu and Kurama detect Pheobe approaching while being pursued by the eagle. They observe her for half an hour, assuming she may be deliberately weakening the creature.
  • Su Yu eventually calls out to ask whether she needs help. His shout distracts Pheobe, nearly causing her to fall from a tree, while the eagle takes advantage of the opening. Pheobe is too exhausted to answer and Apparates away again.
  • Kurama jokes that Pheobe may be selfishly trying to claim the eagle’s single point, while Su Yu remains uncertain whether she is truly executing a strategy or simply struggling to survive.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu demonstrates overwhelming strength and efficiency, quickly earning hundreds of points through large-scale attacks. He also shows strategic awareness by recognizing that the final treasure, rather than ordinary beasts, will determine the competition.
  • Kurama remains playful and perceptive, enjoying the natural surroundings while assisting Su Yu. She also provides comic relief through her blunt commentary and impatience.
  • Pheobe reveals immense pride and determination. Although exhausted and nearly helpless, she refuses to surrender because she cannot accept Beauxbatons’ captain being eliminated immediately.
  • Harry is shown as vulnerable when separated from Su Yu. His dependence on Su Yu’s companionship and cooking becomes clear, though he remains cautious enough to protect himself with the Invisibility Cloak.
  • Malfoy benefits from extraordinary luck and appears relaxed, confident, and socially comfortable alongside Blaise.

Significant Themes

  • Survival and competition: The Champions must balance avoiding danger, hunting creatures for points, and preparing to fight over the far more valuable final treasure.
  • Pride and perseverance: Pheobe’s refusal to ask for help emphasizes her pride and determination, even when survival becomes difficult.
  • Strategy versus brute force: Su Yu’s destructive strength earns points quickly, but he understands that raw monster hunting is not enough to win.
  • Isolation and companionship: The random teleportation separates the students, highlighting Harry’s loneliness and Su Yu and Kurama’s close partnership.
  • Humor amid danger: The contrast between Pheobe’s desperate struggle and Su Yu’s detached belief that she is merely “wearing down” the eagle creates much of the chapter’s comedy.

Character Interactions

  • Su Yu and Kurama work closely together, discussing the nature of the artificial beasts, hunting them, and debating whether to intervene in Pheobe’s fight.
  • Harry’s thoughts reveal how much he values Su Yu’s presence and care.
  • Malfoy and Blaise reunite and spend the evening eating and chatting together.
  • Su Yu twice calls out to Pheobe to offer assistance, but she cannot respond because the eagle attacks whenever she pauses. Their failed communication leaves Su Yu misunderstanding the seriousness of her condition.
  • Kurama teases Pheobe and questions why she refuses help, while Su Yu continues observing and analyzing the situation.

Ch. 191The Final Round (I) (Thanks to Wandu Tinglan for the Three Love-Powered Gifts!)

Chapter Summary: “The Final Round (I)”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Su Yu rescues Pheobe after she spends the previous day fleeing from an eagle. He prepares grilled eagle meat for her while she changes and rests.
  • Pheobe explains that she was too exhausted to call for help and admits that she is still intimidated by Su Yu because of his ruthless fighting style.
  • After eating, Pheobe stays with Su Yu and Kurama. Su Yu agrees to let her travel with them as they continue searching for their companions.
  • Harry realizes he had a flying broom in his storage ring and regrets wasting an entire day traveling on foot. He mounts his Firebolt and begins searching for the others from the air.
  • Outside the examination grounds, Rita Skeeter interviews a Uagadou parent who claims to have placed a weakening spell on the Hogwarts champions. Rita’s enchanted Quick-Quotes Quill exaggerates the story into a sensational report portraying Uagadou as a threat to all British wizards.
  • Mahoutokoro Headmaster Mochizuki Seigen appears tense and repeatedly glances at Uagadou’s headmaster. Grindelwald insults him openly, while Mochizuki silently hints that he is waiting for something important to happen.
  • Daphne, Cho Chang, and Ka-jie form a temporary group. Ka-jie uses her telepathy to locate the others and establish communication, while Daphne prepares breakfast and Ka-jie studies the map.
  • The next morning, Su Yu prepares a full breakfast for Pheobe and Kurama. After some playful bickering with Kurama, he and Pheobe prepare to set off and search for the remaining contestants.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu remains powerful and pragmatic but shows a more considerate side by feeding Pheobe, allowing her to accompany him, and treating her with unexpected hospitality.
  • Pheobe becomes less frightened and more comfortable around Su Yu. She is grateful for his protection and openly pleased when he invites her to continue traveling with him.
  • Kurama provides comic relief through his gluttonous appetite and playful interaction with Su Yu, while also revealing his growing familiarity and affection toward him.
  • Harry demonstrates his absent-mindedness but quickly adapts once he remembers his Firebolt, giving him a much faster way to search the grounds.
  • Ka-jie proves valuable as a coordinator through her telepathic abilities, helping locate and connect isolated teammates.
  • Grindelwald continues to display his arrogance and contempt for weaker or less influential figures, openly humiliating Mochizuki.
  • Mochizuki Seigen appears secretive and resentful, suggesting that he is anticipating a hidden plan or impending event.
  • Rita Skeeter is shown exploiting the competition for sensational journalism, allowing her magical quill to distort the truth.

Significant Themes

  • Cooperation amid competition: Contestants from different academies begin forming temporary alliances, showing that survival and reunion may matter more than strict rivalry.
  • Appearances versus reality: Su Yu appears refined but is feared for his brutality, while the supposedly factual news report deliberately transforms a limited incident into a public crisis.
  • Trust and protection: Pheobe’s growing dependence on Su Yu reflects the gradual development of trust between competitors.
  • Power and intimidation: Grindelwald’s treatment of Mochizuki emphasizes the influence of strength and status within the magical world.
  • Manipulation of information: Rita’s reporting demonstrates how rumors and exaggeration can shape public opinion and create fear outside the examination grounds.

Character Interactions

  • Su Yu and Pheobe share a cautious but increasingly friendly exchange over food and traveling together.
  • Su Yu and Kurama joke and bicker during breakfast, ending with Kurama wiping his mouth on Su Yu’s clothing and receiving a playful punch.
  • Harry independently begins searching for the other contestants using his broom.
  • Daphne, Cho, and Ka-jie cooperate closely, combining domestic tasks, navigation, and telepathy.
  • Rita interviews a Uagadou parent and turns his claims into inflammatory propaganda.
  • Grindelwald openly mocks Mochizuki, who suppresses his anger and hints at an approaching development.

Ch. 192Finals (2) (Thanks to Wandu Tinglan for Your Continued Support)

Chapter Summary: “The Final Round (2)”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Su Yu, Pheobe, and the Nine-Tailed Fox travel by flying carpet after breakfast, but after half a day they encounter no other contestants—not even teammates.
  • Su Yu becomes suspicious that the unusual isolation is deliberate and that someone may be manipulating events or targeting them. He decides they should continue searching until afternoon, then head toward the central finish area if necessary.
  • Sister Fa violently defeats a group of magical beasts, using torture curses before killing them. Without Su Yu nearby to restrain her, her behavior is becoming increasingly unstable and obsessive.
  • Sister Ka gathers several female classmates—Kalis, Daphne, Zhang Qiu, Pansy, and Olivia—forming an almost entirely female group. They worry about the missing boys, especially Su Yu.
  • Malfoy, Goyle, Crabbe, Blaise, and the Weasley twins are found playing a chaotic magical water fight in a river, with Cedric acting as referee. Crabbe cannot distinguish friend from foe, and Malfoy protests after Cedric declares Fred’s side the winner.
  • The Japanese Magic Institute’s remaining fourteen members reunite using a secret technique. Tsuruta Gihei prepares to attack Hogwarts’ students, while Kikuchi Tadao gives him permission and promises support from Uagadou Academy. Their goal is revenge and the restoration of their “empire’s glory.”
  • Harry finally locates Summers, another Hufflepuff teammate, after spending half a day alone.
  • Su Yu, Pheobe, and the fox stop for the night and prepare a tomato fish hot pot. The fox enthusiastically agrees to the meal until Su Yu tells her to catch the fish herself.

Character Developments

  • Su Yu becomes increasingly cautious and analytical. Rather than dismissing the lack of encounters as coincidence, he recognizes that the situation may be part of an enemy strategy. He also continues acting as the group’s practical leader.
  • Pheobe grows nervous when Su Yu suggests that she may also be a target, showing her vulnerability despite traveling with him.
  • The Nine-Tailed Fox remains comic relief, alternating between exaggerated confidence, sinister jokes, food obsession, and reluctance to work. She nevertheless contributes by gathering firewood and catching fish.
  • Sister Fa is shown becoming more dangerous and mentally unrestrained in Su Yu’s absence. Her violent actions and obsessive desire to find him reveal a growing dependence on him as her emotional restraint.
  • Daphne demonstrates concern for Su Yu, wondering whether he is eating properly and coping with the fox.
  • Malfoy retains his dramatic, competitive personality, protesting unfairness even during a friendly water fight.
  • The Japanese Institute’s leaders, especially Tsuruta and Kikuchi, shift the story toward open conflict by organizing a revenge-driven assault.
  • Harry experiences relief when he finally reunites with a teammate, emphasizing how isolated many participants have become.

Significant Themes

  • Isolation and uncertainty: The contestants are scattered so widely that even finding allies becomes difficult, creating tension and suspicion.
  • Hidden manipulation: Su Yu’s realization that the separation may be intentional suggests a larger scheme operating behind the competition.
  • Violence versus playfulness: The chapter contrasts Sister Fa’s brutal killing of magical beasts and the Japanese group’s plans for revenge with the students’ harmless water fight and dinner preparations.
  • Dependence and restraint: Sister Fa’s worsening behavior without Su Yu highlights his role in controlling or stabilizing dangerous personalities.
  • Comradeship and reunion: Harry’s meeting with Summers and the girls’ concern for their missing teammates show that emotional bonds remain important despite the competition.
  • Humor amid danger: The fox’s antics, Malfoy’s complaints, and the absurd water battle lighten an otherwise increasingly threatening situation.

Character Interactions

  • Su Yu and Pheobe discuss the strange lack of encounters, with the fox interrupting through jokes and speculation.
  • Sister Fa’s absent-minded cruelty contrasts with her desire to find Su Yu, showing how strongly she is attached to him.
  • Sister Ka’s group discusses the missing boys, particularly Su Yu, while Kalis humorously focuses on eating cheese crisps.
  • Malfoy’s group engages in a chaotic team-versus-team water battle, with Crabbe accidentally attacking his own side and Cedric serving as referee.
  • Tsuruta and Kikuchi coordinate a revenge campaign against Hogwarts, supported by Uagadou.
  • Harry and Summers enthusiastically reunite after being separated.
  • Su Yu, Pheobe, and the fox cooperate to make camp, though the fox protests when assigned the task of catching fish.

Ch. 193The Riot Begins (Part One)

Chapter Summary: “Riots Begin (I)”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Although only a little over a day passes in the outside world, more than ten days elapse inside the Map of the Wilds and Seas. Meanwhile, students, parents, and academy leaders gather at Hogwarts’ Quidditch Pitch to observe the champions.
  • A massive stone platform belonging to Uagadou Academy suddenly appears above Hogwarts, casting the school into darkness. Headmaster Asante Boakye refuses to explain its presence and instead creates a powerful barrier around the entire academy.
  • Asante is revealed to be an impostor named Mazken, a demon and loyal servant of Demon King Lucifer. She announces that she has come to destroy Hogwarts and reveals that the real Asante Boakye was killed and eaten.
  • Mazken opens multiple portals to hell, unleashing hordes of monsters upon the students, parents, and staff. Parents from Uagadou and the Japanese Magic Institute also reveal themselves as infiltrators and attack those around them.
  • Hogwarts descends into chaos. Dumbledore orders everyone to defend the students, while professors and older students organize a counterattack and evacuate younger children.
  • McGonagall animates Hogwarts’ stone statues with Piertotum Locomotor and assigns the professors and prefects defensive responsibilities. Snape temporarily takes command of Slytherin and joins the battle.
  • The school’s protective systems fail to activate, suggesting that traitors or infiltrators sabotaged Hogwarts from within. Flitwick attempts to restore defensive spells, including a peaceful ward and an enemy-detection charm.
  • Grindelwald attacks Mazken, but she easily blocks his spell. Before he can continue, Mochizuki Seigen attacks him with both a wand and katana, declaring his intention to prove the superiority of the Japanese Magic Institute.
  • Enraged, Grindelwald removes his restraints and unleashes his true power, manipulating the surrounding stands and debris into weapons against Mochizuki.
  • Dumbledore lifts the anti-Apparition restriction and teleports above Mazken, preparing to attack her with a powerful Ring of Fireflame.

Character Developments

  • Mazken is established as the true mastermind behind the assault and demonstrates her monstrous nature, supernatural power, and complete loyalty to Lucifer.
  • Asante Boakye is revealed to have been secretly murdered and replaced, showing the depth of the enemy’s infiltration.
  • Dumbledore shifts from composed headmaster to an openly furious protector, prioritizing the survival of every student and personally confronting Mazken.
  • Grindelwald abandons restraint after being challenged, revealing that he has deliberately limited his immense power for years.
  • Mochizuki Seigen exposes his ambition, arrogance, and hatred. He uses the crisis to challenge Grindelwald and promote the supposed superiority of his academy.
  • McGonagall displays decisive leadership, mobilizing the school’s defenses and coordinating the evacuation.
  • Snape takes command of Slytherin and actively fights alongside the students, while Flitwick focuses on restoring Hogwarts’ magical defenses.

Significant Themes

  • Betrayal and infiltration: The attack succeeds because trusted figures have been replaced or aided by traitors, undermining Hogwarts from within.
  • Protection and sacrifice: Teachers, parents, and older students unite to shield the younger children despite being surrounded by monsters.
  • The return of overwhelming power: Grindelwald’s decision to remove his restraints emphasizes the terrifying strength of legendary figures when pushed to their limits.
  • Ambition amid catastrophe: Mochizuki’s attempt to prove his academy’s superiority shows how pride and rivalry persist even during a deadly crisis.
  • Good versus demonic evil: Mazken’s invasion transforms the academy competition into an open supernatural war between Hogwarts and Lucifer’s forces.

Character Interactions

  • Dumbledore confronts the disguised Asante and demands an explanation, but Mazken responds by declaring war on Hogwarts.
  • Grindelwald protects Dumbledore from danger, then directly challenges Mazken before being intercepted by Mochizuki.
  • Mochizuki taunts Grindelwald and insists that he must defeat him before reaching the demons.
  • Grindelwald responds with contempt, unleashing his suppressed power and turning the environment against Mochizuki.
  • Dumbledore and Grindelwald effectively divide the battlefield: Grindelwald confronts Mochizuki while Dumbledore moves to attack Mazken.
  • McGonagall, Snape, Flitwick, and the other professors coordinate their defenses, organizing students and adults into a unified resistance.

Ch. 194The Riot Begins (2)

Chapter Summary: “The Riot Begins (2)”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Grindelwald dominates Mochizuki Seigen, inflicting numerous debilitating effects while Seigen is forced to defend himself from a massive rebar-and-concrete dragon and a Fiendfyre phoenix.
  • Despite being repeatedly burned to ash, Seigen regenerates. Realizing he cannot defeat Grindelwald normally, he sacrifices himself to summon the demon Shuten-doji.
  • Shuten-doji emerges as a gigantic, five-horned, fifteen-eyed demon after consuming Seigen. He attacks Grindelwald, but Grindelwald exploits his vulnerable eyes, mouth, and ears rather than trying to damage his tough exterior.
  • Across the battlefield, the monster army overwhelms the hastily assembled defensive line. Academy headmasters, British Aurors, and Ministry personnel attempt to evacuate and protect the students, suffering heavy casualties.
  • Hermione activates her Nine-Tails Cloak and stands alone between the advancing monsters and the Gryffindor students, while terrified students—including Ron—struggle to respond.
  • A seventh-year Slytherin prefect assumes command when Snape proves unable to organize the students. Slytherin coordinates attacks and advances toward Hermione, honoring its promise to support and protect her.
  • Dumbledore uses a powerful area attack, “Fire God Clears the Way,” while fighting the demigod-level demon Mazken. Fudge directs the Ministry forces despite the danger and calls for reinforcements.
  • Isolde volunteers to infiltrate the rear of the demon army, targeting its archers and mage corps. Using silent magic and a poison-coated blade, she kills numerous enemies.
  • Grindelwald finally defeats Shuten-doji with a massive lightning strike, reducing the demon to ash. He then joins Dumbledore against Mazken, teasing Dumbledore about his apparent fatigue while insisting that he will not let his old companion die first.
  • The battle continues, with Isolde’s ruthless slaughter earning her the fearsome reputation of the “French Black Rose.”

Character Developments

  • Mochizuki Seigen: Reveals extreme resilience and madness, willingly sacrificing himself to summon Shuten-doji. His transformation from helpless victim to dangerous catalyst emphasizes his desperation.
  • Grindelwald: Demonstrates overwhelming combat ability, tactical intelligence, and confidence. He defeats Shuten-doji through precision and strategy rather than brute force, then assists Dumbledore.
  • Shuten-doji: Returns to the human world as a powerful but arrogant demon. His confidence makes him underestimate Grindelwald, leading to his defeat.
  • Hermione: Takes responsibility for protecting the younger Gryffindors, displaying courage and leadership even when isolated.
  • Slytherin students: Show loyalty to Hermione by organizing themselves under their prefect and moving to reinforce her. Their previous promise to become her support is proven genuine.
  • Dumbledore: Remains immensely powerful but shows signs of exhaustion while fighting Mazken.
  • Fudge: Though not a top-tier fighter, he proves capable of courage and leadership, directing the defense instead of fleeing.
  • Isolde: Emerges as a highly lethal assassin, combining silent spellcasting with poisoned-blade combat and earning widespread recognition.
  • Ron: His fear and paralysis contrast with Hermione’s bravery, showing how overwhelming the battle is for ordinary students.

Significant Themes

  • The terror of unleashed power: The destruction caused by Grindelwald, Shuten-doji, and the elite demon army illustrates the danger of demigod-level combat.
  • Strategy versus brute force: Grindelwald defeats Shuten-doji by targeting weaknesses instead of challenging his physical durability directly.
  • Sacrifice and desperation: Seigen gives his life to summon a stronger entity, showing how far combatants will go in the escalating conflict.
  • Courage and leadership: Hermione, the Slytherin prefect, Fudge, and Isolde all step forward despite overwhelming odds.
  • Loyalty across house divisions: Slytherin’s willingness to protect Hermione demonstrates that shared trust can overcome old rivalries.
  • The cost of war: Numerous Aurors die, the defensive line collapses, and even powerful leaders show exhaustion as the battle intensifies.

Important Character Interactions

  • Grindelwald relentlessly attacks Seigen, then outmaneuvers the summoned Shuten-doji.
  • Seigen invokes Shuten-doji through self-sacrifice, surrendering his body to the demon.
  • Hermione protects the Gryffindor students while Slytherin organizes a rescue and support effort.
  • The Slytherin prefect takes charge in Snape’s absence of leadership and coordinates attacks with the students.
  • Dumbledore battles Mazken, while Grindelwald mocks him before joining the fight.
  • Fudge coordinates with the headmasters and Aurors to hold the defensive line.
  • Isolde passes through the frontline and attacks the monster army’s rear, relieving pressure on the defenders.

Ch. 195The End of the Riot

Summary of “The End of the Riot”

Key Plot Points and Events

  • While Hogwarts students, professors, parents, and Aurors battle the invading magical-creature army, Luna Lovegood watches from the sidelines in a venomous snake mask. She remains unconcerned because Su Yu ordered her to observe rather than fight.
  • Luna demonstrates the power of the Ancient Magic Su Yu taught her by transforming attacking creatures into teddy bears. Her thoughts also reveal her eccentric affection for Su Yu and her ongoing habit of losing her shoes to Nargles.
  • Dumbledore and Grindelwald fight Mazken together. Their combined power—Grindelwald’s blue Fiendfyre and Dumbledore’s phoenix-based attacks—gradually overwhelms her.
  • Mazken realizes that retreat is impossible because her master would punish her. She therefore unleashes her remaining demonic power and attempts to kill Dumbledore or Grindelwald before dying.
  • Hermione fights alongside the Slytherin students on the front line. Ginny joins her, and Hermione’s courage inspires many Gryffindors to overcome their fear and enter the battle. The Gryffindors and Slytherins argue, but ultimately fight together.
  • Dumbledore and Grindelwald defeat Mazken. Grindelwald’s Fiendfyre burns her body to ashes, ending the magic sustaining the hellish portal.
  • As the portal closes, magical creatures still trapped between worlds are severed. Hogwarts survivors celebrate, while Minister Fudge collapses in relief and terror.
  • The victory is immediately darkened when Moody reports heavy casualties among parents, Aurors, and school leaders, including the headmaster of Koldovstoretz, who sacrificed himself to protect Hogwarts students.
  • Moody suddenly attacks Dumbledore, stabbing him with a cursed blade. Grindelwald knocks Moody away and catches Dumbledore as he collapses.
  • Madam Pomfrey discovers that the curse prevents the wound from healing. Dumbledore is rushed for emergency treatment, with orders to obtain blood-replenishing potions and connect Hogwarts to St. Mungo’s.

Character Developments

  • Luna remains detached and whimsical amid the chaos, but her ability to casually use powerful Ancient Magic establishes her as far more formidable than her passive behavior suggests. Her affection for Su Yu is also emphasized.
  • Dumbledore and Grindelwald demonstrate exceptional teamwork and mutual trust despite their age and complicated history. Their cooperation rekindles memories of fighting side by side, and Grindelwald’s panic after Dumbledore is stabbed reveals his deep concern for him.
  • Mazken becomes desperate and reckless once defeat is inevitable. Her willingness to fight to the death shows both her strength and fear of her master.
  • Hermione emerges as a source of courage for the Gryffindors and helps unite students from rival houses.
  • Ginny actively supports Hermione and returns to the front lines, while the Gryffindor students shed their initial fear and prove their bravery.
  • Moody is revealed as the apparent betrayer who attacks Dumbledore at the moment of victory, creating a major mystery about his motives or possible manipulation.
  • Fudge is shown to be overwhelmed by fear once the immediate danger passes, contrasting with the bravery of the students and fighters.

Significant Themes

  • Victory mixed with tragedy: The battle is won, but the deaths and Dumbledore’s stabbing show that triumph does not erase loss.
  • Unity against a common enemy: Gryffindors, Slytherins, professors, parents, and former rivals such as Dumbledore and Grindelwald cooperate to defeat the invasion.
  • Sacrifice and heroism: The Koldovstoretz headmaster gives his life to protect students, emphasizing the cost of resistance.
  • Hidden power and appearances: Luna’s playful behavior conceals great magical ability, while Moody’s trusted identity conceals a dangerous threat.
  • Old bonds and renewed cooperation: Dumbledore and Grindelwald’s battlefield partnership suggests that past relationships and loyalties can resurface in moments of crisis.
  • The fragility of peace: The celebrations are abruptly interrupted, reinforcing that the conflict may not truly be over.

Important Character Interactions

  • Luna privately reflects on Su Yu while using his Ancient Magic.
  • Dumbledore and Grindelwald exchange teasing remarks during their battle with Mazken, then cooperate closely to defeat her.
  • Hermione and Ginny reunite during the fighting, with Hermione’s example encouraging Gryffindor participation.
  • Gryffindor and Slytherin students trade insults but fight together against the creatures.
  • Moody reports the casualties to Dumbledore before unexpectedly stabbing him.
  • Grindelwald protects Dumbledore and carries him to Madam Pomfrey, whose emergency treatment reveals the cursed nature of the blade.

Ch. 196Ultimate Purpose

Chapter Summary

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Under Snape’s Veritaserum, Barty Crouch Jr. confesses that he assassinated or incapacitated Dumbledore as part of a larger plan. The monster army’s attack on Hogwarts was intended to create the opportunity. With Dumbledore unconscious, no one can control the Map of the Wilds and Seas, leaving Harry and Su Yu vulnerable.
  • Snape realizes the danger and leaves McGonagall and the others to seek Grindelwald’s help.
  • Inside the Map, Su Yu and Pheobe have spent over ten days waiting in the central zone without encountering anyone or discovering Dumbledore’s promised treasure. Their tense waiting is lightened by the Nine-Tailed Fox, who catches an enormous fish and earns dinner—after accidentally being struck by it.
  • Harry and Summers travel toward the center by broomstick. Harry’s scar has been increasingly painful, suggesting a connection to the wider danger, but they are ambushed by Tsuruta Gihei and five other students.
  • Summers bravely shields Harry and fights the attackers, but Gihei easily blocks his spells. Harry realizes they are outmatched and regrets not learning more offensive magic. Summers urges him to escape and use the necklace around his wrist if necessary.
  • Neville is confronted by Naba Kullibali and seven Uagadou champions. Naba claims to be acting on Voldemort’s orders and identifies Neville as another person born at the end of July who must be killed. Neville, now far more confident than in the past, questions both the accusation and Uagadou’s apparent alliance with Voldemort.

Character Developments

  • Barty Crouch Jr. is exposed as a fanatical Death Eater who takes pride in successfully neutralizing Dumbledore.
  • Snape shows alarm and urgency, recognizing that the real targets are still Harry and Su Yu.
  • Su Yu and Pheobe have grown more comfortable with one another, developing a playful, familiar rapport.
  • The Nine-Tailed Fox remains energetic and mischievous, proudly contributing to the group while providing comic relief.
  • Harry becomes increasingly worried by his painful scar and recognizes his lack of combat ability.
  • Summers demonstrates loyalty and courage by placing himself between Harry and the attackers despite being heavily outnumbered.
  • Neville displays newfound confidence and composure. He is no longer easily frightened, even when facing a large group of hostile wizards.

Significant Themes

  • Betrayal and conspiracy: Crouch’s confession reveals that the Hogwarts attack was part of a calculated scheme to remove Dumbledore’s control over the map.
  • Vulnerability and isolation: With Dumbledore incapacitated, the students inside the map are cut off from protection and assistance.
  • Courage and loyalty: Summers protects Harry, while Neville refuses to be intimidated by his enemies.
  • Growth and self-reliance: Harry recognizes his weaknesses, while Neville’s response shows how much he has matured.
  • Humor amid danger: The fishing scene with Su Yu, Pheobe, and the Nine-Tailed Fox contrasts with the increasingly serious attacks elsewhere.

Character Interactions

  • Snape interrogates Crouch and reacts to his revelation with concern.
  • Su Yu and Pheobe exchange teasing remarks while waiting for the Nine-Tailed Fox to catch food.
  • Harry and Summers cooperate during the ambush, with Summers taking the protective role.
  • Tsuruta Gihei taunts Harry and confidently leads the attack against him and Summers.
  • Neville confronts Naba Kullibali verbally, challenging his claims about Voldemort, the Savior identity, and Uagadou’s involvement.

Ch. 197The Poisoner (Could you all take a look at the ending?)

Chapter Summary

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Naba Kullibali reveals that the High Priest prophesied that both Neville and Harry may become saviors, suggesting that Heaven’s Will has created multiple possible candidates.
  • Neville stops pretending to be helpless and unveils his new identity as a Potioneer. Using a bottomless bag, Levitation, and Accio, he turns potion-filled syringes into remotely retrievable weapons.
  • Neville attacks the Uagadou students with a wide variety of lethal potions, including:
    • Despair Emerald Potion, which causes excruciating pain, magical depletion, organ failure, and death.
    • Living Hell Draught, Poisoned Mead, Basilisk venom, and other poisons.
    • Explosive and corrosive substances that bypass or consume magical defenses.
  • Neville defeats the entire group in under two minutes. Naba is struck by numerous potion needles and left unconscious under the effects of multiple poisons.
  • Neville proudly credits Su Yu for helping him save his parents and develop his potion-based combat style. However, observers nickname him “The Poisoner,” viewing him as the wizarding world’s greatest menace.
  • After more than ten days of travel, Kalis and the other girls reunite with Malfoy, Blaise, Pansy, and the others. They join the group’s playful water-gun battle by the stream.
  • While everyone else relaxes, Daphne senses that something is wrong. The group has failed to find Su Yu or any students from other academies, raising suspicion that something unusual has happened.
  • Elsewhere, Harry and Summers fight six students from the Japanese Magic Institute. After the opponents activate a stronger form and become possessed by Shikigami, Summers is overwhelmed despite the Nine-Tails Cloak. Harry’s attacks cannot break through their defenses, and Summers’s remaining chakra is nearly exhausted.

Character Developments

  • Neville undergoes a major transformation from a reluctant participant into a highly dangerous and confident combatant. He embraces the “Potioneer” profession and discovers that his knowledge of potions can be weaponized with devastating efficiency.
  • Neville’s moral boundaries appear to have shifted. He is enthusiastic about using substances capable of causing horrific suffering and death, although he still frames his actions around protecting his parents and staying with his loved ones.
  • Naba Kullibali, previously confident and condescending, is completely defeated and reduced to an unconscious, suffering victim.
  • Su Yu’s influence continues to shape events even in his absence. His unconventional idea of combining wizardry with concealed weapons becomes the foundation of Neville’s new fighting style.
  • Daphne becomes the only member of her group to recognize that their carefree journey conceals a larger danger.
  • Summers is pushed to the brink of death, emphasizing the growing power of the Japanese students and the seriousness of Harry’s situation.
  • The author discusses potentially killing off Summers as an unimportant supporting character while protecting the main cast, and announces plans for a separate Western-fantasy novel.

Significant Themes

  • Innovation and the fusion of disciplines: Neville transforms ordinary potion-making into a modern, weaponized combat system by combining magic, syringes, remote retrieval, and mass attacks.
  • The terrifying potential of magic: The chapter presents magic not as an elegant or noble art, but as a tool capable of delivering chemical warfare, assassination, and overwhelming destruction.
  • Fate and multiple chosen saviors: The prophecy introduces uncertainty over whether Neville, Harry, or both are destined to save the world, reinforcing the idea that fate may deliberately create multiple possibilities.
  • Comedic relief versus looming danger: The water-gun battle provides a lighthearted contrast to Neville’s brutal massacre and Summers’s desperate fight, highlighting how differently various characters experience the ongoing crisis.
  • Isolation and missing information: The absence of Su Yu and students from other academies suggests a hidden development that the characters have not yet uncovered.
  • Power through adaptation: Neville succeeds because he creatively applies Su Yu’s advice rather than relying solely on conventional wizarding techniques.

Character Interactions

  • Neville confronts Naba’s arrogance and responds to his prophecy with a surprise attack, reversing the power dynamic between them.
  • Neville’s actions demonstrate Su Yu’s indirect mentorship and the lasting bond between the two characters, even though Su Yu is not present.
  • Kalis angrily confronts Blaise and the others for enjoying themselves without the girls, but quickly joins the water-gun fight after Blaise invites her.
  • Blaise escalates the playful conflict with an oversized water gun, provoking teasing and mock outrage from the girls.
  • Daphne remains emotionally separate from the celebration, observing the group and worrying about the unexplained disappearance of other students.
  • Harry struggles to protect Summers while facing the enhanced Japanese students, creating a sharp contrast with Neville’s effortless victory elsewhere.

Ch. 198The Strongest Solo King, Theodore

Chapter Summary

Key Plot Points and Events

  • After nearly twenty days in the Map of the Wilds and Seas secret realm, Theodore discovers smoke from a nearby mountaintop and Apparates toward it, hoping to find other students.
  • He witnesses a horrifying scene: Harry is suffering from intense pain while kneeling beside the corpse of Summers. A hooded figure—whom Theodore identifies as Wormtail—binds Harry to a tree and prepares a boiling cauldron.
  • Wormtail carries a grotesque, hairless, snake-faced infant-like creature, which orders him to put it into the cauldron. Theodore realizes that a dangerous ritual or transformation is about to occur and secretly activates his Slytherin Badge’s emergency assistance signal.
  • Before Theodore can intervene, Nagini attacks him. Harry tries to warn Theodore that the Japanese Magic Institute members have betrayed them and allied themselves with Voldemort, but Theodore cannot understand him because of the gag.
  • Six Japanese attackers ambush Theodore. He traps them in a Water Prison and strikes the sphere with lightning, apparently killing them all.
  • The attackers survive through the Shikigami Heavenly Empress’s healing power and summon six powerful Shikigami: Heavenly Empress, Sky, Great Robe, White Tiger, Black Tortoise, and Great Yin.
  • Theodore identifies their combat roles and immediately targets the healer. He transforms Heavenly Empress into a newborn Acromantula and crushes it, eliminating the group’s support.
  • He then defeats Sky, the aerial attacker, by dragging him to the ground, violently slamming him, and finishing him with the Killing Curse. The remaining four Shikigami and their summoners remain engaged in the battle.

Character Developments

  • Theodore demonstrates heightened caution and tactical intelligence. Rather than rushing blindly into the ritual, he observes the situation, calls for assistance, and waits for a decisive opening.
  • His confidence and power are emphasized as he effortlessly survives multiple ambushes, uses Apparition fluidly, and combines Ancient Magic with conventional spells.
  • Theodore shows strong battlefield awareness, recognizing the importance of eliminating the healer first and then neutralizing the flying combatant.
  • Harry is portrayed as helpless and traumatized after witnessing Summers’s death. Despite being bound and gagged, he attempts to warn Theodore about the Japanese faction’s betrayal.
  • Summers is revealed to have been killed by the attackers, suggesting that the ambush party is extremely dangerous.
  • Wormtail appears as a brutal servant of Voldemort, recognizable by his missing finger. He tortures and restrains Harry while preparing the mysterious creature for the cauldron.
  • The Japanese attackers are revealed to possess powerful Shikigami linked to Abe no Seimei, making them a coordinated and formidable team.

Significant Themes

  • Betrayal and hidden alliances: Harry’s warning reveals that the Japanese Magic Institute members have joined Voldemort, turning former competitors or allies into enemies.
  • Horror and dark rituals: Summers’s corpse, Harry’s captivity, Wormtail’s cauldron, Nagini, and the malformed infant create a disturbing atmosphere and suggest an impending magical ritual.
  • Tactical combat: Theodore’s victory depends not only on raw strength but also on recognizing team roles, prioritizing the healer, and disrupting the enemy formation.
  • Power and confidence: Theodore’s contempt for the attackers highlights his growing dominance and belief that few opponents can truly threaten him.
  • Isolation and uncertainty: The long absence of fellow students gives way to a dangerous encounter, emphasizing that finding others in the secret realm may be more threatening than remaining alone.

Character Interactions

  • Theodore encounters Harry but cannot understand Harry’s muffled warning because Harry is gagged.
  • Harry attempts to alert Theodore that the Japanese fighters have betrayed the students and allied with Voldemort.
  • Wormtail interacts violently with Harry, binding and silencing him while preparing the cauldron and responding to the grotesque infant’s commands.
  • Nagini serves as a direct attacker against Theodore, preventing him from immediately stopping the ritual.
  • Theodore clashes with the six Shikigami users, exploiting their formation by killing Heavenly Empress first and then targeting Sky.
  • The chapter ends with Theodore still fighting the remaining enemies, while the fate of Harry, Wormtail, Nagini, and the mysterious creature remains unresolved.

Ch. 199Full Mobilization (Thanks to That... That Brother with the Japanese Name, You Really Made Things Hard for Me)

Chapter Summary

1. Key Plot Points and Events

  • The battle inside the Inner World escalates rapidly: two of the six Shikigami are destroyed almost immediately, leaving the remaining four to face Theodore, who is vastly stronger despite having once been a Hogwarts student like them.
  • Voldemort’s resurrection ritual continues. Wormtail lowers Voldemort’s infant-like body into the cauldron and begins reciting the ritual incantations.
  • Theodore realizes he has missed the ideal opportunity to stop the ritual, so he resorts to provoking Voldemort. He mocks Voldemort’s birth, his mother’s use of Amortentia, his murder of his father, and his insecurity about his family name.
  • The insults enrage Voldemort so severely that the cauldron begins violently bubbling. Wormtail is so startled by Voldemort’s fury that he momentarily forgets the ritual.
  • Theodore is forced to evade the combined attacks of the White Tiger and Black Tortoise Shikigami.
  • Theodore’s emergency badge activates, alerting the Slytherin group. Sister Ka organizes an immediate rescue mission, ordering Zhang Qiu to locate Theodore and the others to prepare an Inner World passage.
  • Daphne is instructed to contact Sister Fa, while the Slytherin warriors prepare to launch a counterattack. The Weasley Twins and Cedric are confused by the group’s sudden mobilization and their own exclusion from the main operation.
  • Zhang Qiu successfully identifies Theodore’s coordinates and prepares to open a passage. Malfoy, Goyle, and Crabbe are ordered to enter first, followed by the rest of the group.
  • Sister Fa, who has already slaughtered countless giant eagles, receives Theodore’s distress signal. She recognizes that the enemy’s larger plan has begun and accelerates her own advance by shattering space and stepping through it.
  • Meanwhile, Wormtail proceeds to the next stage of the ritual, cutting Harry’s arm to collect his blood. His injured, shaking hand accidentally carves a large “S” into Harry’s skin.
  • Theodore’s sudden shout startles Wormtail, causing him to drop and shatter the blood-collection bottle. Voldemort becomes furious with both Theodore and Wormtail, deciding that Theodore should be punished before Harry.

2. Character Developments

  • Theodore demonstrates tactical flexibility and psychological boldness. Although he knows he can no longer directly stop the ritual, he uses Voldemort’s personal history and insecurities to disrupt the ceremony and create chaos.
  • Voldemort is shown to be extremely vulnerable to ridicule concerning his parentage, abandonment, and family identity. His rage begins interfering with the ritual and exposes his lack of emotional control.
  • Wormtail remains physically weakened and inept. His injury affects his ability to perform the ritual, and his panic and clumsiness repeatedly frustrate Voldemort.
  • Sister Ka takes command efficiently, reassuring Olivia while coordinating a large-scale rescue and counterattack.
  • Zhang Qiu displays technical skill by using runes to locate Theodore and prepare a passage into the Inner World.
  • Sister Fa appears overwhelmingly powerful and ruthless, having destroyed a large number of enemies before immediately responding to Theodore’s emergency signal.
  • Cedric shows a willingness to help despite being unfamiliar with the group’s plans. Malfoy’s blunt dismissal gives him a better understanding of why Harry finds Malfoy so irritating.
  • Olivia is visibly worried about Theodore, revealing her emotional investment in his safety.
  • Malfoy remains direct and tactless, prioritizing practical military arrangements over politeness.

3. Significant Themes

  • Psychological warfare: Theodore’s insults are nearly as important as physical attacks, exploiting Voldemort’s shame and anger to interfere with the ritual.
  • Power and teamwork: Theodore’s struggle triggers a coordinated response from the Slytherin group, showing how individual danger activates a broader mobilized force.
  • Ritual versus disruption: Voldemort’s carefully structured resurrection ceremony is repeatedly threatened by interruptions, injuries, emotional outbursts, and simple incompetence.
  • Humor amid violence: The narration contrasts brutal events—Harry’s injury, the slaughtered eagles, and the collapsing battle—with absurd comedy, including Voldemort’s humiliating origin story and Wormtail’s accidental “S.”
  • Emotional vulnerability beneath villainy: Voldemort’s rage reveals that his past and perceived illegitimacy still deeply affect him, despite his desire to appear invulnerable.
  • Social bonds and loyalty: The Slytherins’ immediate response to Theodore’s distress signal emphasizes their unity and commitment to protecting their own.

4. Character Interactions

  • Theodore and Voldemort: Theodore taunts Voldemort about his parents, birth, and surname, while Voldemort responds with explosive fury and vows revenge.
  • Voldemort and Wormtail: Voldemort repeatedly criticizes Wormtail’s failures. Wormtail’s fear and incompetence worsen as the ritual progresses, while Voldemort’s anger shifts between Theodore and his servant.
  • Theodore and the Shikigami: Theodore dodges the White Tiger and Black Tortoise after the other Shikigami are eliminated, emphasizing the dangerous imbalance in the battle.
  • Sister Ka and Olivia: Sister Ka reassures the worried Olivia before taking command of the rescue operation.
  • Sister Ka and the Slytherin warriors: She issues precise orders, turning the group from observers into an organized strike force.
  • Malfoy and Cedric: Cedric offers to help, but Malfoy bluntly tells him he will only be useful as additional numbers. Cedric privately recognizes why Harry dislikes Malfoy.
  • Sister Fa and the enemy forces: After destroying the giant eagles, Sister Fa receives Theodore’s signal and immediately begins breaking through space to join the developing conflict.
  • Harry, Wormtail, and Voldemort: Harry endures the blood ritual while Wormtail struggles to collect his blood. Their tense situation becomes absurd when Wormtail drops the bottle, provoking another outburst from Voldemort.

Ch. 200Support Arrives! (Thanks to the generous reader with the Japanese name for consistently sending love-powered support these past few days)

Chapter Summary

Key Plot Points and Events

  • Wormtail pours Harry’s blood—scooped from the ground rather than collected directly from his wound—into the cauldron containing Voldemort. Voldemort angrily criticizes Wormtail’s incompetence but allows the resurrection ritual to continue.
  • Theodore defeats the Shikigami one by one. Heavenly Empress, Sky, Great Robe, and Great Yin are killed by Ancient Magic lightning, while White Tiger and Black Tortoise launch a final desperate attack against the exhausted Theodore.
  • Voldemort successfully rises from the cauldron and officially regains a physical body. His new form is pale, hairless, noseless, and more monstrous than before.
  • Rather than immediately attacking, Voldemort revels in having a body again. He then summons the Death Eaters using Wormtail’s arm, despite Wormtail’s desperate reminder that Voldemort promised to restore him.
  • Theodore arrives carrying the heads of two defeated enemies and confronts Voldemort. Voldemort dismisses him and orders Theodore’s father, Old Nott, to prove his loyalty by killing his own son.
  • Voldemort tortures the Death Eaters who abandoned him during his thirteen-year absence, using the Cruciatus Curse and threatening the survival of their families.
  • Sister Fa and several Slytherin allies—including Young Master Malfoy, Goyle, Crabbe, Sister Ka, and other warriors—arrive through spatial portals. Their arrival alarms Voldemort, who recognizes them as the group that previously defeated him.
  • Aware that he has not yet regained his full strength, Voldemort orders Old Nott to delay the newcomers while the remaining Death Eaters escort him, Harry, and Wormtail away.

Character Developments

  • Voldemort returns to life but immediately displays his familiar cruelty, arrogance, and insecurity. His resurrection brings him joy, yet he is cautious because he remembers being defeated while still recovering.
  • Wormtail becomes increasingly pathetic and fearful. He is injured, mocked, and abused by Voldemort, but still clings to the promise that his lost arm will be restored.
  • Theodore demonstrates remarkable endurance and combat ability by defeating multiple Shikigami despite severe exhaustion. His confrontation with Voldemort shows that he remains defiant even when surrounded.
  • Old Nott is placed in an agonizing position, forced to choose between obeying Voldemort and facing his son.
  • Young Master Malfoy tries to maintain a confident, stylish appearance but is visibly frightened when he realizes Voldemort has returned.
  • Sister Fa remains fearless and openly contemptuous of Voldemort, immediately challenging his authority upon arriving.
  • Voldemort’s Death Eaters are portrayed as cowardly and disloyal, begging for forgiveness after abandoning him, only to be punished for their betrayal.

Significant Themes

  • Tyranny and fear: Voldemort rules through terror, torture, humiliation, and threats against his followers’ families.
  • Loyalty under coercion: The chapter questions whether obedience forced by fear can be considered genuine loyalty.
  • Resurrection and vulnerability: Voldemort’s return is triumphant but incomplete; he is powerful yet cautious while recovering his former strength.
  • Defiance against evil: Theodore and Sister Fa refuse to submit, contrasting with the Death Eaters’ fear and surrender.
  • Dark comedy amid danger: Wormtail’s repeated incompetence, Voldemort’s irritation, and Malfoy’s attempts to look impressive provide comic relief within the violent confrontation.
  • Consequences of betrayal: Voldemort’s punishments show that he has not forgotten those who abandoned him during his absence.

Character Interactions

  • Voldemort repeatedly insults and abuses Wormtail, treating him as disposable despite relying on him for the resurrection.
  • Theodore confronts Voldemort directly after killing two opponents, while Voldemort attempts to undermine him by weaponizing Old Nott’s loyalty.
  • Voldemort tortures his former followers for betraying him, demanding that Old Nott prove himself through violence against Theodore.
  • Sister Fa immediately clashes verbally with Voldemort, rejecting his claim to authority.
  • Young Master Malfoy reacts nervously to Voldemort’s presence, while Sister Ka focuses on locating Theodore and assessing the battlefield.
  • The arrival of the Slytherin forces shifts the balance of power and forces Voldemort to retreat rather than risk another defeat.
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