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Interesting story, rushed ending, but still good

Good story overall, racist though.

good story, didn't drag it out and kept it tight throughout.

good novel throughout, though the ending was a little rushed. Similar to what happens to most fan fics, authors just can't handle the increasing power level and can't really find a way to write more plot without relying heavily on the source material so they decide to end it early. I would've loved to get a couple more chapters on what happens after the end.

It was pretty great for the first 100 chapters, then author started dropping 6k word chapters that are atleast 30-50% filler. after chapter 200 he basically throws out all his prep work and exposes himself which makes it so madara can bully him for 50 chapters straight. I think killing Danzo too early is what went wrong and the author had to compensate there being no antagonist before the big bad, which caused him to face madara early.

I stopped at the end of soul land and it was a nice short story. author tries to call out some of the bullshit from the original angel clan.

Was refreshing seeing a DD2 story that doesn't involve the bug or electrolux, but the author seems inexperienced with conversations and keeps contradicting himself. I couldn't make it past 25 chapters

For some reason all chapters after chapter 50 are cutoff. The original is fine, but the translation is cutoff