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Genuinely terrible sentence idea chap 1.
Decent read if you turn your brain off lol. Lots of plot inconsistencies and rushed ending. Also don’t expect stuff to be scientific (even when it pretends to be).
Welp I was enjoying it but It's dropped T_T
4/10
A staggering disappointment.
The premise has promise, the opening chapters the first 50-100 are good. I'm interested in the world building and excited to see where things go.
Main antagonist is killed unceremoniously by a random boss monster, oh... I thought they were going somewhere with this. They've been setting up a confrontation.
A character important to the MC's backstory and who starts with him in the mortal world, is mentioned repeatedly and seems to be building towards something. Unceremoniously killed off.
Big giant death scorpion who is actually a remnant soul from the spirit world and is looking like the next antagonist. Dies pathetically.
Honestly I'm not even sure what the main character is trying to do now. Like he doesnt seem to have a goal besides increasing his cultivation. No motivation. Also the timeline is wildly inconsistent. Sometimes the author says 10 years have passed, then the next chapter it will say it's been 2 years, and the next will say 5, or 1.Not bad just feels like a boring read. The story itself does not seem to flow very well and feels very episodic in nature. The harem part seems needlessly tacked on and not done well.
Translation is a mess from chapter 70 onwards. Paragraphs etc are all over the place.
1 replyI was breezing trough the story but later on i feel it drags on more.
@ZeypherIN have marked for retranslation, can u check and lemme know if its better or still the same bro?
???/10
Something is very clearly wrong and the quality of the chapters vary drastically.
First 100 ish chapters
Solid and consistent if something I've read before 7/10
Chapters 100-200
It seems like some chapters might be missing and some scenes dont make sense and the writing quality has dropped. 5/10
200+
Makes no sense, many scenes are disjointed, and the writing quality has hit the floor. Plus even the power ceiling of a lot of characters are still just doing the same quick side step to dodge a blade from chapter 10. 3/10A fucking disappointment. Characters are shifted around (one moment in Douluo World, another in Xian Ni World). And Tang San, a lv30-40+ ant, knows of divine power and spatial laws? Fucking author is just toying around. Trash Slop, don't read. Or read with your brain turned off.
Good novel, just did not like the cultivation world his clone got send to. The previous worlds ie Batman, Demon slayer and even Marvel was fine.
A pain to read.
9/10. An interesting fanfic. The focus here isn't really on getting more powerful, though that's the MCs main motivation. But with his cheat its almost guaranteed that he'll become OP. What's more interesting is the way it plays with established characters in Naruto and the situations that are made in the world.
Feel like this is just someone's twisted fantasy? Characters are emotionless and mc just kills anyone he wants, treats people like objects, massacres innocent people, commit war crimes, it doesn't even feel like a story.
A good book and story. I love the part that he is not about conquering the world. Even the main background canon events were written well and presented in a different way.
1likeToo much back and forth with characters being alive then dead then alive again
@geriatricvibes AGreed. Danzo should have been killed ages ago. Just him dying early means Sarutobi will compromise with everything.
In a world where urban legends and ghost stories with scp like abilities are becoming reality and the whole world is being gamified, we can view a mc who’s definitely insane, dealing with all this stuff with some pretty entertaining and unorthodox methods. One big con for me is there’s a concerning amount of lolis, even with attempts at self awareness with fbi jokes and such it’s still eh.
Very good simulation novel - the best I’ve read.
@NightClaim2355 bad source, way more chaos now. Still updated