Contents of this article
1. Review of major female characters (multiple pictures)
2. Plot summary
3. Author's talk, questions and answers, and inner thoughts
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The beginning of this book is actually very average and even toxic. This is why many new readers give negative reviews without reading much.
Many books collapse at the end of writing, but the author gradually gets better and better, and the quality becomes more stable as the writing progresses. This is obvious to everyone.
Therefore, the author often asks everyone for good reviews, because he does not want new readers to abandon the book because of the flaws in the front.
Here's another request, please give me some good reviews, woo woo woo!
The text begins!
Let's talk about the major heroines first.
1. Su Jinyu(Xiao Qi)
One of the three heroines established at the beginning of the book.
Absolutely the royal palace!
The real person's first appearance is the first guild gathering.
Little rich woman, long black hair, girlish, top-notch temperament and good looks, innocent and cute, jealous, easy to coax.
The female head of the guild "Mountains and Rivers in Lasting Peace", Chen Nian's personal little cotton-padded jacket, will help with all kinds of matters, big and small, and is one of the first people to follow Chen Nian.
Ability: Sword riding, Ten Thousand Swords Art, etc.
Divinity: Mysterious Lady of the Nine Heavens(Taoism Saint)
Key plot point: During the first "Blood Moon Calamity", he was almost killed by Twin Demon God, but was saved by the male protagonist.
During the camp battle, he went to the border with Chen Nian and met Banished Immortal's Li Taibai. Later, he learned swordsmanship from him and his combat power increased greatly.
Author's brief comment: The male protagonist Bai Yueguang will definitely be completely conquered in the later stages and will have an exclusive story line, so don't worry!
Discussion room.
2. Zhao Yixue
concept map
One of the three major heroines has been conquered.
Personality: Paranoid, yandere, possessive, expressionless and down-to-earth person
Ability: Ice system, Moonlight system, Heart Moon Secret Technique
Divinity: Chang'e
Special relationship with the male protagonist: Heart Moon Mark, both parties will fall in love on a full moon night.
Key plot point: In the Lost Continent, he visited the Chang'e temple with the male protagonist and obtained Chang'e Divinity. During the battle between the male protagonist and Heavenly Cascade, he risked his own life and resisted Heavenly Cascade's blow with his body, almost dying.
Author's comment: I saw a comment before saying that I don't like Zhao Yixue. In fact, there is an advantage to this kind of paranoid girl. Even if the whole world abandons you, she will still stand by your side. She will regard your life as more important than her own.
Discussion room.
3. Ye Hongling
One of the three major heroines, a royal sister-type character.
Keywords: red hair and red eyes, big and big, black stockings, loves to tease Chen Nian, numb voice, high IQ, good at scheming, top body
Ability: Fire
Divinity: Vermilion Bird
Pet: Juvenile Vermilion Bird (Xiao Zhu)
Key plot point: Chen Nian accompanied her to Fire Eye Abyss. Unable to withstand the burning of the red beam of light, Chen Nian rushed in to protect him. Then Ye Hongling hugged him and kissed him happily, turning his desire into strength.
Chen Nian gave her Vermilion Bird Divinity, looked at her, and Ye Hongling gave her a kiss.
The two went to find Vermilion Bird together, got Vermilion Bird essence and blood and Xiao Zhu bird eggs, and gave birth to Xiao Zhu bird.
Author's comment: There is no man who doesn't like black stockings.
Discussion room.
4. Princess of the ancient country, Gu Qingyue
The princess in the ancient kingdom of the lost world
Keywords: Love the people, be kind, ambitious, want a love, conquer the country and conquer the city, master of palace fighting
[Polygamy is allowed here openly, as long as I am the princess, I can also help you manage the backyard]
Divinity: Goddess of Mount Wu
Ability: Ability to change appearance at will
Key plot: He was chosen by lot as the sacrifice of Mountain God. Through the calculation of the Daoist master, he learned that his "wishful husband" was a changer of the world's rules and held an eternal luminous pearl. Therefore, he found Chen Nian, and the two had a false seven-day love through a transaction.
Finally Chen Nian killed Mountain God and rescued her.
Later, after the camp war ended, I followed Chen Nian in Mount Wu Yunyu and obtained Goddess of Mount Wu Divinity.
Lines: Human life is very short, I just want to use the limited time to love someone and chase a dream; if I had never seen Sun, I could have endured the darkness.
Author's brief comment: Although it is an urban novel, it cannot be without a heroine in ancient costume!
Discussion room.
5.Shangze Sakura
Today I spent a long time to make a picture of Shangze Sakura. It can only be described as perfect!
It not only fits her name, but also fits her Divinity, invisible blood loss!
Keywords: petite, slender, gentle, speaks very quietly, likes to imitate the behavior of other girls to express his jealousy euphemistically
ps: Don't just say that you are underage when you see the picture, you are an adult. All pictures are generated by AI and do not represent the actual characters.
Chen Nian's personal maid can kill, cook, and warm beds! She can even wear a maid outfit!
I secretly like Chen Nian but I am shy to express it. My wish is to stay with Chen Nian forever.
Ability: Ninja type, Weapon: Kunai
Divinity: Kaguya-hime (Sakura Country mythical appearance ceiling)
Key plot: After her brother Uesawa Ueki was "Judgment", she came to Dragon Country and asked Chen Nian for help to save her brother. Chen Nian said that you should take good care of me, so she embarked on the road of no return as a personal maid.
Later, he was rejected by Chen Nian and returned to Sakura Country in despair. Judgment took action that day and fell into a desperate situation.
At this time Chen Nian took action and rescued the two of them by herself. In order to avoid Sakura Country's pursuit, she stayed with Chen Nian.
In the battle of God-Demon Capital, she obtained Kaguya-hime Divinity, and volunteered to save Chen Nian who was contaminated by Blood of Immortality (ahem...
Author's brief comment: Sakura has a gentle and obedient personality and doesn't speak too loudly. Who doesn't love Sakura like this? The author does anyway.
Discussion room.
6. Tang Rou
Do you have a picture of Tang Rou? It doesn't seem like there is one. Find one now...
Tang Rou: Boss, what are you waiting for? Get in the car!
Do you feel like a female secretary?
Keywords: female secretary, foodie, wet nurse, lively, lying down, social animal working as a worker, never gain weight by eating
Abilities: Healing, buff, vine related
Divinity: God of Spring
Key plot: The first time was during the battle of "Blood Moon Calamity", and he helped Chen Nian. The second time was when he was invited to join the guild. Unexpectedly, he was deceived and brought into a rich second-generation guild. Chen Nian happened to be there, and he saved her and invited her to join the guild.
Because he lived in the same city, he naturally became Chen Nian's secretary to deal with practical chores. Later, he went to the hospital to help Tang Rou awaken Divinity"God of Spring".
Author's brief comment: In the author's pre-design, Tang Rou was actually a supporting actress, but her roles increased unknowingly, and she actually had more roles as a "tool person" than some female protagonists.
However, I feel that Tang Rou's current position is quite interesting. Although she can definitely be promoted to the heroine, she will still maintain a [secretary x boss] relationship with the male protagonist in a short period of time.
Discussion room.
7. Tamamo-no-Mae
Keywords: Thousand-year-old fox demon, silver hair, Nine-Tails, jade feet, good legs, charming, ears and tail, cunning, watching the fun is not a big deal, just interesting
Abilities: Fox Dream, Charm, Mirror Flowers and Water Moon, etc...
Body: Nine-Tails demon fox
Key plot: God-Demon Capital fell in love with Chen Nian's ability and traded with him. The real purpose was to use Chen Nian to seize Blood of Immortality and use Haruna rebuilt the immortal body, but Blood of Immortality was forcibly drank by Chen Nian, and then Chen Nian agreed to help her get her sealed body back.
Abe no Seimei came back to kill Tamamo-no-Mae, and finally Chen Nian won the battle with Seimei.
There was an inexplicable feeling for Chen Nian in my heart.
Author's brief comment: As the Nine-Tails demon fox controller, the author can be said to have been quite attentive to the shaping of Tamamo-no-Mae.
The intersection between her and the male protagonist is not a simple relationship like who saved whom, or who fell in love with whom.
Instead, start with "Transaction".
But Tamamo-no-Mae had another purpose behind this transaction. In the end, she wanted to reshape her body, which also reflected her cunning and scheming.
As she and the male protagonist make many transactions and help each other, the two will get to know each other better and have a deeper relationship.
The progress of this subtle relationship is quite interesting. In my eyes, this is the process that the Nine-Tails demon fox should have. It is tangled and complicated, but it is interesting to watch. After all, the thousand-year-old fox demon is not as silly and sweet as Su Jinyu.
Discussion room.
8.Haruna
Haruna is a supporting actress, not a heroine.
Keywords: Shy easily, useless miko, why are you all taking advantage of me QAQ
She is God-Demon Capital Onmyō Bureau, a shrine maiden who serves Kaguya-hime.
When she was a child, her whole family was killed by Karasu Tengu, and her own heart was swallowed. It was Tamamo-no-Mae who saved her and became her heart at the cost of a fox tail.
From now on, there is a sharing of perception between the two.
Author's comment: Although she is a supporting actress, she and Tamamo-no-Mae share a sense of perception, and may become a further bridge between Chen Nian and Tamamo-no-Mae in the future. If Tamamo-no-Mae is captured, she will probably also be a dowry maid...
9.Tsuchimikado Rika
Keywords: loli, onmyoji, genius, tsundere, snack food
Ability: Onmyōjutsu
I won't go into details about the plot, I just finished writing it.
Rika, the most gifted modern Onmyoji, his abilities are not awakened through Transcendent, but through practicing Onmyōjutsu.
Not only did he get Yin-Yang Eyes, but he also got the scroll of twelve forbidden arts left by Abe no Seimei.
Author's brief comment: The character Rika is very special. She is the first modern person who does not rely on "awakening" but has the power of Transcendent (there will be others in the future)
Her talent is undoubtedly top-notch, and she can only be said to be very strong, one of the most powerful forces in the future!
As for her relationship with Chen Nian, it currently feels like a "bad friend". She will like Tang Rou's sister very much, but every time she sees Chen Nian, she will call her a bad guy.
But when Chen Nian is in trouble, she will still help. This relationship is still very interesting.
When she grows up, she won't rule out the possibility of being promoted to a heroine.
Since there are restrictions on posting pictures, I won't post any pictures later.
10.Ai Lan
Supporting actress, not many roles, currently one of the members of Mountains and Rivers in Lasting Peace
Keywords: Blonde mixed race, purple is very charming
Ability: Water ability
Divinity: God of Rivers
Plot: Originally the president of Blue Sea and the Like, she later had a conflict with the guild and was rescued by Chen Nian. He helped her obtain God of Rivers Divinity and then brought her to join the guild.
11.Ning Ziqing
The male protagonist's unrelated sister, supporting female role
Not many roles, occasional appearances, cute type, keyword "JK girl"
12.Zi Nan
The supporting actress, Xiao Qi's best friend, was absorbed by Chen Nian's "Fourth Beast" after being killed, and now becomes Chen Nian's summoned beast
Ability: Necromancy
She used her ability to help Chen Nian subdue Undead Bone Dragon. From now on, when Fourth Beast appears, he will basically be Undead Bone Dragon.
12. Qin Yu
Keywords: singer, fake girlfriend
Author's brief comment: I know that many people have inexplicable feelings for this character. Although she is very ordinary, she is the first female character that the protagonist comes into contact with, and people often comment that they want to see her play.
In fact, in the author's original plan, she was a heroine who went through the motions, and basically didn't have much role after the transition to the early stages.
In fact, from the previous introduction, you can also feel that most of the heroines who are now or become heroines have distinctive characters, extraordinary abilities, and exclusive plot lines.
One of the author's criteria for writing a heroine is not to write a pure vase, she must have a role.
Therefore, if Qin Yu wants to be promoted to a heroine in the future, she will definitely have to spend a lot of time reshaping the plot and create an exclusive plot to sublime it.
Are there many readers who like Qin Yu? I remember that she barely had many scenes... Post it here so I can take a look.
There are still missing comments here.
Finally, as the plot progresses, a new female protagonist will definitely be added.
The review of female characters ends.
Plot review.
1. The first big plot is the "Blood Moon Calamity" chapter.
BOSS: Twin Demon God.
After Chen Nian finished fighting the frontal battlefield, he found that the other one of Twin Demon God was on the side of Xiao Qi, so he rushed to support him. At the critical moment, he rescued Xiao Qi and killed Demon God.
That is, after here, Chen Nian came into contact with "Divine Gene" for the first time and owned Divinity.
2. The second big plot, Heavenly Demon Island battle
BOSS: Demon God of Trickery, Deep Sea Demon God
Demon God of Trickery is on the top of the Heavenly Demon Island tower, and if people want to see him, they must step by step from the outer island to the inner island, and then climb the tower.
Of course, there are also obstacles to this plot, that is, everyone is divided into a "small island". If the island is destroyed, they will lose their qualifications.
Once all the islands are destroyed, Heavenly Demon Island will sink.
In the end, Chen Nian entered Heavenly Demon Tower, and the other companions helped him clear the way, hitting Heavenly Demon Tower, and defeated Demon God of Trickery with difficulty.
Unexpectedly, Demon God of Trickery summoned Deep Sea Demon God, and Chen Nian launched "Zhurong" to kill instantly and win.
3. The third big plot, Lost Continent battles Heavenly Cascade.
After the Heavenly Demon Island war, the island World Gate was opened and people could pass through and enter another dimension, Lost Continent.
Lost Continent This plot can be said to be the most carefully designed section in this book.
There are many intertwined threads inside, as complex as a spider web.
There is a war between guilds from various countries, fighting to capture National Fortune Points and fighting for national honor.
There is also the emotional line of the princess.
Mountain God sacrifice line in the dungeon.
Ai Lan's guild conflict line.
"Black Calamity" covers the world, and the final boss Heavenly Cascade is also a line.
There are also other countries invading the dungeon, the battle line between Uesawa Ueki and the protagonist.
So many story lines were intertwined together to finally form this large copy.
Moreover, it also contains the foreshadowing of the destruction of the gods.
It is also in this plot that the author played a cunning trick and inserted a copy of a fantasy novel into the urban novel.
Writing like this is very risky!
If the writing fails, the book will be finished, which will cause a large number of readers to abandon the book.
Once written, it won't actually bring anything. In fact, it is a high-risk, low-return approach to writing.
The line Gu Qingyue was written under this kind of pressure.
But the author still tried it. Fortunately, I happen to have experience in writing fantasy novels.
At least this plot has been written completely and has a flavor.
In the end, the protagonist takes the artifact Mountain-Splitting Axe and kills Heavenly Cascade, allowing the people in the underground city to see the sun again and come to the surface to build a new home.
I feel like the character Gu Qingyue is brought to life.
Especially when writing about the "conflict" in her heart.
She is not afraid of death or becoming a sacrifice, but she is reluctant to leave Chen Nian and wants to live and stay with him for more time (Chapter 183
The author believes that those with a "sense of contradiction" are the real human nature, and people cannot be perfect or have only one good side.
4. The fourth big plot, Sakura Country rescues Shangze brother and sister fight
This plot is not as complicated as the above, so it's just a blast!
By the way, it embodies the hero's character of attaching importance to friendship. If others help him, he will remember it in his heart, and he will be happy to mention the maid in the end.
5. The fifth major plot, camp battle
BOSS: Heavenly Torrent Rank, Beast God
In this plot, Su Jinyu and Chen Nian act together and find Ancient Desolate Forbidden Zone at the border of the Lost Continent. They also meet the old man "Li Bai" who guards the restricted area.
Xiao Qi and Chen Nian both have their own gains here. Xiao Qi learned the sword of Li Bai, and Chen Nian understood the poem of Li Bai.
Finally, Li Bai chanted "The roc rises with the wind in one day and soars ninety thousand miles" and left gracefully.
Xiao Qi goes back to support, Chen Nian enters Eastern Wilderness alone, and fights Beast God.
At the end of the battle, Chen Nian borrowed wine from Li Bai and defeated Beast God with the song "Jiang Jin Liquor".
From then on, he learned to use Li Bai's poems as one of his fighting methods.
6. After passing through Dragon Calamity, Vermilion Bird and other small transitions, we came to the sixth major plot.
God-Demon Capital!
This big plot is also intricate and multi-threaded, comparable to the Lost Continent.
Although you have just finished reading it, the author is still here to help you sort it out.
First of all, Demon King is about to be revived. The white camp wants to prevent Demon King from reviving, and the black camp wants to prevent Demon King from reviving.
This leads to a battle line between the two camps.
Haruna line, Haruna's family was killed by Karasu Tengu, and then rescued by Tamamo-no-Mae. In the end, she got her wish for revenge and was redeemed.
Shangze Sakura line, she wanted to become stronger, so she kept working hard, and finally got Kaguya-hime Divinity, and also helped Chen Nian as she wished, proving her worth.
Uesawa Ueki and Hanyu Hayabusa fight for the second time. This time Shangze, who has lost his arm, returns strongly, kills Hanyu, reunites with his sister, and achieves self-salvation.
Kaguya-hime line, Kaguya-hime is a god of Protection's white camp. Shuten-doji wanted to pursue her thousands of years ago. She was afraid of Shuten-doji, so after learning about Chen Nian's ability, she wanted to bet on Chen Nian.
Tamamo-no-Mae line, Tamamo-no-Mae trades with Chen Nian, you must deliberately resurrect Shuten-doji, and then kill him to get Blood of Immortality.
Chen Nian promised Tamamo-no-Mae, and finally defeated Shuten-doji with difficulty and obtained Blood of Immortality.
Originally the plot should have ended here...
However, Tamamo-no-Mae's conspiracy was discovered by Chen Nian. Her ultimate goal was to use Haruna as a container to obtain an immortal body, so a reversal occurred.
Chen Nian tricked Tamamo-no-Mae, but promised to help her get her body back, so Tamamo-no-Mae followed Chen Nian to the real world.
Abe no Seimei recovery.
Here we introduce the classmate of Chen Nian, Yang Wei line
Tsuchimi Village, modern Onmyoji, Rika line.
Just in line with the previous plot, the archaeological team of Yang Wei discovered the sealing place of Demon Blade Murasame, which happened to be Tsuchimikado House Clan Protection.
The strongest Onmyoji Abe no Seimei comes to kill, and another battle begins.
As soon as everyone finished watching this battle, we stopped reviewing it.
Yang Wei gained self-salvation, Rika's values were impacted, and he took the initiative to help Chen Nian.
But the villain Abe no Seimei also has an emotional line!
He has hated monsters since he was a child, but his mother was also a fox monster. Seimei's father saved the fox monster. In order to repay his kindness, the fox monster fell in love with his father and gave birth to Seimei.
But after Seimei found out, he killed his mother. His value to the demon is that the demon must die.
Before his death, after the battle with Chen Nian, he may have figured out that not all monsters are bad, at least the mother who was gentle and protective of him might be a good monster.
That's why he passed the scroll of twelve forbidden arts to Rika.
[Scoring session: Which of the above plots do you like? Full score is ten points]
Plot summary:
Writing a big plot is extremely brain-consuming, and in the process of setting up the plot, it cannot be too boring. Even the ambush must be interesting and interesting to capture the readers.
It's so difficult!
The question is, do readers like straightforward plots, or more complex plots that require foreshadowing?
I haven't thought about the next plot yet, so I suggest you come here and let the author copy the book review to save your brain!
Q&A.
Q: Yang Jian is too weak, can it be replaced with Divinity?
A: Yang Jian is not weak, and its strength has nothing to do with Divinity. The main character Divinity will not change, but the protagonist can obtain other Divinity abilities (such as Li Bai's poem)
Q: Why are all the gods dead?
A: Among Calamity, there are Demon God, Heavenly Cascade, and there are higher and more powerful beings. If they want to occupy a plane, they must first kill the god of this plane.
Therefore, all the gods in the Lost Continent (Dragon Country Myth) and God-Demon Capital (Sakura Kingdom Myth) were destroyed, and only a few weak ones survived.
Q: Which ones will be charged?
A: If there is a detailed description of the appearance, an exclusive plot line, and a benign intersection with the protagonist, accept it.
I'll skip the unimportant female characters because I can't write about them with pen and ink, or I'll write some emotional lines for the supporting characters.
Q: Is it going to end?
A: This is only a few words, it's still early
Heart talk session.
I haven't asked for any kind of reward so far since I wrote this book. Most of the requests I asked for were positive reviews, but I just didn't want this book to be buried by the previous negative reviews.
But the writing in the front is really average, otherwise I wouldn't have scored nine points, eh!
Getting nine points is my only wish.
If you have time to follow up, it is the greatest support for the author. Thank you!
Today I wrote 6,000 words of miscellany. Although it is not the main text, the author compiled and collected it and wrote it all in an afternoon.
Will update as usual tomorrow.
See you tomorrow!