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Definitely great story keep bringing chapters

I like the concept, really good job there. I can't exactly say in words but there is something.... off about the author's writing. It's really hard for me to read more than 10-20 chapters of this a a time, no idea why. Thus I dropped it.

Way to much description writing on everything else except what I want to read

It’s 80% nonsense and 20% story, it seems like a good and interesting fan fiction but I just can’t stand all the nonsense

Honestly this novel is kind of an insane hidden gem. Its very pervy and goonery, but so long as you can stomach or enjoy that content you'll find a gem inside the trashcan. (Yes, its harem but pretty well done all things considered)

The writing is surprisingly good. There's alot of likeable characters around the MC. But the battles are the highlight. It truly gets your blood boiling when it comes time to have a showdown. To be honest this might have the best written fighting sequences I've read in a novel for years. Would recommend. This is a top of the line novel for the site but may have a nicher audience to the perverseness and slightly more focus on romance, but it feels like has great balance overall.

It starts off slow, but the more you read the better it gets.

@AngryWeekend344 its a first person novel? You are reading it from mcs perspective so yeah u technically in his mind

The translation is way too bad. Its all I, me. Not a single he word in a sentence its like listening to the mc’s mind all the time

Great story with a reasonable developpement. This is a wish fufilment book done the right way.

Overhyped, every plot twist has 5 more twists after it and the protagonist always gets in over his head and is saved at the very last second by plot armor

The first 39 chapters are ok,but after that everything ia chapter padding going off on remminescence, history, philosophy, some random shit takes a whole chapter to explain, 2 chapters later we go back to the main event. Rinse and repeat, i guess this book would have been fine erasing 1 mil words, maybe a little less.

The MC has a bland, nearly faceless character (just like most Uchiha do). Originally, the dynamics within the village and the numbers looked reasonable, but things got more and more mind-boggling and inconsistent.

I dont know why I started reading since I know one piece is my most disliked world together with naruto

It was going great but whenever mass slaughering happens i just feel its too much, I dont mean people that are out to kill him but if you already killed all the higher ups and combat forces of a corporation, going ahead and killing all the employees(thousands) is way to much, it was good untill that point but i dont think ill keep reading

I readed up to chapter 50.

It's a generic, bad Chinese fanfic.

The only interesting thing about the fic is the crossover, but other than that it has several of the problems that the worst Chinese fanfics have.

Some examples are the MC becoming overpowered very quickly, an extremely arrogant MC, an MC who kills someone and exterminates the clan for verbal offenses, and a hypocritical MC who, if the enemy is a beautiful woman, forgives and helps her even if she tried to kill him.

in chapter 14 the soul ring suddenly became a thousand year one???? the soul ring would have been purple so how could they have mistaken it for a century year soul ring???

this just doesn't make sense, and the fact that he can absorb a spirit ring when someone else killed the soul beast.

it seems like the author is changing the rules of the douluo world but to be fair I'm not against it I just want to be let aware that things will be different before hand

8/10. Starts of very well, middle part is also damn good. But after 600+ chaps it starts losing steam since there is no actual threat remaining. Author starts branching off and showing side stories in a way all the time which got boring.

Decent but gets slower and slower as the story progresses. At some point you get 8 full chapters of reaction to a single event.

This story is dumb as fuck but also kind of interesting. I mean really the story has a Dou king somehow being able to master or even practice a Heaven level technique and also promise to “change the Dou qi attribute” of someone which I hope doesn’t happen but whatever my point is that this is dumb but it is dumb fun I gues 3 out of 5 stars I would say

The novel's mostly good with the exception of the occasional bursts of contradictions. Like in one chapter the MC reveals his Limit Breaking Soul Ring to Gangzi yet when he fights againt the Heaven Dou Imperial Team Gangzi is shocked by the purple-purple-purple-black rings. And another is when Bibi Dong guessed that the Golden Angel in the chat was Qian Renxue yet some chapers later she acts as if she doesn't know who Golden Angel/Qian Renxue is.

Edit: Another one is when the MC, Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong clearly says to both the Shrek Team they'll join Heaven Dou Royal Academy, suddenly in a later chapter Tang San asks where Xiao Wu went? My brother in Christ, this author is clearly smoking something.

Edit 2: MOTHER FUCKER!!! Is this author ever gonna stop contradicting themselves? In earlier chapters the MC said that he looked down/didn't like the Sea God Position and everyone in the chat group was shocked yet now at ch.207 they're SUDDENLY oh so shocked and confused again! I only have one question now... Is this author brain-dead? Do they think this is fun? Its not. Its very, very not fun for me to read repeated things over and over again.

pretty good and grounded senju + wood release mc novel. Diplomacy flow

Edit: It’s getting too fillery in the latest chaps bro. Author trynna emulate naruto