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BerialAstral
64 · EliteThe novel's mostly good with the exception of the occasional bursts of contradictions. Like in one chapter the MC reveals his Limit Breaking Soul Ring to Gangzi yet when he fights againt the Heaven Dou Imperial Team Gangzi is shocked by the purple-purple-purple-black rings. And another is when Bibi Dong guessed that the Golden Angel in the chat was Qian Renxue yet some chapers later she acts as if she doesn't know who Golden Angel/Qian Renxue is.
Edit: Another one is when the MC, Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong clearly says to both the Shrek Team they'll join Heaven Dou Royal Academy, suddenly in a later chapter Tang San asks where Xiao Wu went? My brother in Christ, this author is clearly smoking something.
Edit 2: MOTHER FUCKER!!! Is this author ever gonna stop contradicting themselves? In earlier chapters the MC said that he looked down/didn't like the Sea God Position and everyone in the chat group was shocked yet now at ch.207 they're SUDDENLY oh so shocked and confused again! I only have one question now... Is this author brain-dead? Do they think this is fun? Its not. Its very, very not fun for me to read repeated things over and over again.
One chapter says Snow Empress & Ice Empress knows/met Venti, while another says/implies they JUST fucking met... This god damn contradictory novel goes into the trash bin.