The Primordial Land: Reordering the Leylines

The Primordial Land: Reordering the Leylines

洪荒之我梳理地脉
Author:
Mr. Fairness
Uploader:
TheDouluoGuy 68
Source:
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Genre:
Xianxia
Status:
Completed
Protagonist:
Male Lead
Fandom:
Investiture of the Gods
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Reborn into the Primordial Land, schemes and calculations mean nothing to me. I only want to transform this Primordial Land into the way I envision it!

Hongjun: "That's not right! Why isn't this going according to my calculations?"

Luohu: "No! Am I the demon, or are you the demon?!"

Dikun: ""Fellow Daoist, why not join me in helping the Primordial Land transcend?""

Zhou Jun: "Now this is how the Primordial Land should truly be!"

What I want to write is a different Primordial Land, one that exists in my heart. I'm a new author, and my writing might not be perfect. The initial parts reflect my understanding of the illogical aspects of the Primordial Land, and they are also necessary for the later plot. It might be a bit verbose, as a new author, I might struggle with focusing on the main points, please bear with me.

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